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America Storytime of Pain
Brandon Morales
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Jaxson Morgan
Caleb Murphy
Wyatt Gray
This is the storytime of pain i needed
Angel Jenkins
Carter Nelson
I think this is the "literally in awe" issue
or it's coming up
Jaxon Ortiz
Eeeeeeh what how can she have two biological moms. Wtf is this implying one of the moms has a dick
Cameron Nguyen
Tyler Long
she's from a magical lesbian dimension made by a gay super-god
Daniel Hughes
You can stop OP. There are people who love you. Don't do this
Anthony Gomez
Oh god the art, these faces. At least it compliments the writing nicely
Cameron Smith
Of course the new love interest is black.
Nicholas Jones
Ramon Villalobos, the poor man's poor man's Quitely
Cooper Rodriguez
No.
Eli Cooper
>phone has a projector that makes a holographic screen that's smaller than the phone screen
This is at the same time the stupidest and most realistic thing about this comic so far.
Nicholas Powell
Eeeer yeah but then why she has biological traits of both moms. I prefer my theory. I want futas canon in the marvel universe
Josiah Reed
Why are you driving? You can fucking teleport.
Nolan Stewart
futa is gay
Noah Wilson
Caleb Green
How do you fuck up faces that much and get hired by marvel holy fuck. Legit impressed on how bad the pencilling is. A'd thesz fingers man. Holy shit.
Isaiah Bailey
now I know it's physically painful to read this comic, but they did establish her new girlfriend didn't want her to teleport to her
Joseph Howard
I wonder who this new character could be.
Did they? I really shouldn't be doing this at five in the morning.
Aaron Diaz
Yes and? Makes more sense than space lesbian god lol
Carson Rivera
hey did you guys forget the last four issues? I know I did!
no no, the god is a gay man, the dimension is lesbian
Xavier Cook
Nolan Peterson
The madman fucked a dimension. Holy shit
Austin Cooper
Jack Thomas
God damn it the art wasn't impressive on the last issues but this is a new low holy shit. I'm finding these faces hilarious. They gave America an overbite on the last panel god damn retards hahaha
Colton Moore
Ryan Harris
at least the inking has improved
Lincoln Rivera
It just keeps getting worse.
Ethan Hughes
>America Chavez-enthusiast
really don't like how all the characters who like her are described as fans. Friends not good enough for Gabby?
Jaxon Rivera
Everyone has to tell you how great America is, if you do that you don't actually have to write a good character.
Nathaniel Jackson
Nolan Reed
The pencilling got considerably worse tho so it's way worse.
Matthew Cook
Michael Gomez
>it's ok to kill cyborgs
Charles Adams
Here it is!
You can go away now.
Please go away
Kevin Nguyen
oh fucks sake. is that a new series with that shitstain?
Hunter Green
and then everyone clapped
Christopher Taylor
Joshua Torres
Someone saw this faces, someone saw them and said "yeah those look good".
That someone is probably still working at Marvel.
Isaiah Reed
Wait what was the point of this issue? Like it's just "mamacita imma driving in the desert and suddenly cyborgs but ay caramba imma strong"
Like. Why did they run in the desert? Where are they going? What is the point?
Benjamin Adams
what was the point of this series?
Ethan Torres
Fucking Christ.
Jason Taylor
Wonder how DC's Cyborg would feel about this.
Nolan Lopez
A bunch of my hispanic friends have said they have been pissed that a buncha uppity white assholes started complaining that Speedy was racist so Warners stopped using him and you hardly see him in America anymore.
Brayden Wright
I mean, faces are not the sole determinant of quality art, look at Quitely and Burnham
but you are generously assuming anyone glanced at this before it went to print
Samuel Robinson
Letters from real human beans.
Charles Bennett
Halfway there.
Cameron Carter
>I mean, faces are not the sole determinant of quality art
You are right, but I wouldn't consider America as any form of art.
Isaiah Parker
this is literally WE WUZ KANGS the comic book
Joseph Anderson
Daniel Harris
> #
> #
>>Then Captain America berates America for ruining a two month long operation to isolate and kill Hitler, ending the war early and saving countless lives. America responds with 'so what, I punched Hitler, is that not good enough'
>Between this and # I have a hard time believing that Gabby wasn't a brilliant troll playing a long con. The scene you're describing in particular is a metaphor for everything wrong with the modern social justice movement in a nutshell:
>A queer, time traveling, woman of color completely oblivious to the wider consequences her use of violence has on the world around her. But it's ok because punching a nazi made her feel good and powerful in the moment
Sometimes insane sincerity and what sounds like parody are indestingishable.
Carson Walker
I read this with my sister. She really hates it. She says she couldn't believe there are people who think this is good.
Landon Collins
>hey you guys know one of the most iconic covers in comics
>what if we did an homage to it
>but what if we made it as lifeless and soulless as possible
It's weird that I'm this anal-pained about this, but here we are.
Parker Martinez
Seeing all those characters on the first panel make me want to read Spider-Man instead of doing this to myself.
Jonathan Anderson
America seems to have that effect on people.
Angel Thomas
Holy shit that pacing. Why is gabby considered a writer when you fuck up pacing and character interaction THAT much.
Benjamin Allen
A fucking warlock luchador? I can't comprehend how anyone could see this as anything other than a racist caricature.
Also some fantastic dialog on Kate's part, real fucking good.
Adrian Hall
some user said Kelly Thompson wrote all of Kate's dialogue in these issues, and I get the feeling she was paid by the word
Joseph Davis
Oh great, now my last name is involved in this shitheap.
Colton Sullivan
Let's be honest i see where the artisr wa't to go with aesthetic. He wants to do li'e some moebius inspired ligbe clare shit but his skill is too sloppy and needs construction. It feels like he uses 3d models for the body posing but messes up the faces. It's sloppy as hell man
Chase Taylor
At least America is getting beaten up this chapter.
Eli Foster
That's some fucking A+ Spanish right there.
If you're going to write a story about a fucking latino superhero you fucking should at the very fucking least know fucking Spanish.
FUCK
Kayden Ortiz
And here come the mid-chapter changes in art.
Owen Carter
this is still Villalobos, suprisingly
Chase Torres
The author literally just google translated the Spanish lines. She's a Puerto Rican that doesn't actually speak Spanish.
Dominic Taylor
I don't even know what she's supposed to be saying here.
Jordan Stewart
what POSSIBLE reason could the star portal have to drip
Daniel Morgan
It's like everyone involved in this is just completely fucking incompetent.
Elijah Thompson
It's hot out
Ian Morris
Beetle deserves better than this
Kevin Wright
Brandon Roberts
We deserve better than this
Sebastian King
do we? Do we really?
Luis Price
Caleb Sullivan
Oh you crazy bitch you doing the whole thing?
Jacob Martinez
Is this fucking porn now?
Dylan Walker
You know it.
Nathaniel Nelson
Still can't believe Rivera had the balls to have America break up with her longtime girlfriend to turn and have her instantly in love with some not heard of before girl from her past.
Hell the reason she broke up with other one was cause of "I don't like long distance relationships" and in this story America is willing to go to aimless driving in the California desert for the black girl.
Ayden Young
Why is the control thingy burning? What?
Dylan Foster
I really want to know why interdimensional lesbians share so much in common with earth wrestling.
Brandon Rogers
I wonder if the added sound effects on top of the artistic sound effects that were already there was because nobody was reading the very comic they were editing.
Ayden Miller
Tyler Sullivan
What bad club drugs is Riri on?
James Watson
Some more great dialog.
Austin White
Living on a prayer.
Dominic Sullivan
Liam Thomas
I don't even know anymore.
Aiden King
Consider this though:
The real reason that America's girlfriend broke up with her was because she wanted to avoid having her personality assassinated by appearing in this trash.
Luis Watson
Hey Yea Forums, are you huggers?
Aiden Sanchez
and now she'll never appear again so I guess that works out
Sebastian Lopez
So you either die in obscurity and replaced by some self insert OCs,
Or you live long enough to have character assassination.
It's a tough life for those non-suoerhero love interests I'll tell ya.
Benjamin Watson
hugs are nice
Jose Morgan
James Thompson
I still can't believe that fucking made it in.
Matthew Sanchez
Joseph Hall
for a comic so focused on being woke, these covers sure could get pretty sexy
>we heard you liked art shifts
Jayden Ward
And the art changed, again.
Jason Nguyen
that is FIVE count em FIVE different artists for a single 20 page issue
Blake Moore
Say what you will about the America, but she's rockin' a pretty nice arse.
Thomas Fisher
It's something else, that's for sure.
Caleb Jackson
Hey I'll take "generic art you see in ads for some anime-esque phone game" over the not-so-frank quietely art that was before.
Christian Hall
I'm getting real fucking tired of having to edit images to make them fit the size limit.
Tyler Hall
>until Berraca punched Sanar RIGHT IN THE FUCKING FACE
what terrible names
Jose Brown
>crack your ancestors wide open
jesus wept
Caleb Morales
Jackson Gomez
And the art changed again.
Wyatt Jenkins
Elijah Butler
I'm surprised they didn't name them chupacabras.
Ayden Edwards
Sebastian King
Jaxson Campbell
Gabby probably can't spell chupacabra
Kayden Morales
Guess what changed again.
Jacob Young
Dylan Martinez
Gabriel Lewis
You can't just use apostrophes randomly.
Benjamin Jackson
Latino Lesbian GMILF Incest and possibly Futa! This is great.
Caleb Davis
The next page I post is going to be part of a magic trick, pay attention to how this page looks.
Joseph Perez
there's no futa
Joshua Reed
There is nothing in this art that indicates it was traced. Seriously, this comic is dogshit but you don't know what the fuck you're talking about.
This. Frankly anyone who thinks the art in this is notably bad, especially compared to the writing, only reads cape shit and thinks anatomy matters. They likely think Jim Lee is anything but garbage. Comic art is about telling a story, exaggerated faces and poses do this.
Jason Russell
And now I say the magic words "HOLY MENSTRUATION" and bam!
Notice anything different?
Carson Murphy
Carson Hill
That leg in panel one god damn it
Isaac Edwards
Nolan Phillips
Worst part is they didn't even use them to properly differentiate time and dimension which would have at least made it seem natural.
Hunter Hernandez
Elijah Howard
A male! I spotted the male.
Liam Cox
That's just a woman with a beard.
James Richardson
It doesn't take away from the panel at all. These America threads are always filled with straight up fucking casuals.
That's a perfectly fine panel, your obsession with anatomy is why garbage tracers like Janin have taken over.
Joshua Cruz
I think this page sums up the comic pretty well: nothing of interest happen but you got to be boisterous about it.
Nolan Rivera
Really? You're going to fucking do this in a storytime of pain?
Ethan Allen
Oh no the invincible 6 year old had a hard childhood.
Adrian Cook
No letters this time.
Ryder James
But she had to deal with a life of everyone she meets instantly liking her! That must have been a nightmare.
Charles Butler
>hello fellow human beings my name is gabby riviera, this is how lgbt poc talk
Jaxon Anderson
Joseph Reyes
>Onions latina
No, you're an alien pretending to be latina.
Joseph Reed
Why the fuck did they need five artists to work on this shit. Did no one wanted them to fucking work with that jàmon planet?
Asher Johnson
Fucking stupid word filter.
Nathaniel Stewart
Yeah because you insufferable faggots don't even know what to complain about. You know even less about comics than Gabby fucking Rivera.
Every other fucking page you or some other idiot shits on art thatciajt bad when there's legitimately TERRIBLR fill in artists in some of these issues. You choose the shit you find off putting because you have no clue what makes comic art good or bad. Anatomy and rendering have NOTHING to do with quality. Go to a fucking museum if you want beautiful static art.
Again, faggots like you are why we get terrible, no-aesthetic, poorly labeled tracer shit from human garbage like Mikel Janin.
Matthew Phillips
That is not a dog.
Kayden Parker
Wait so the kindness of random Latin woman that America chose to define herself with is now a bad thing?
Jaxon Ward
Deadlines and rewrites. And frankly, yes, the one that had been intended probably said "this could be actively bad for my career because since it's a terrible book brainless faggots on Yea Forums will call the art bad too because they don't know any better".
Andrew Carter
Well this space mexico thing is wayyy too weird to me. But in a way it raises interesting questions like "why kryptonians are basically just strong white people" but there is one huge flaw: krypton aint like, space murrica, it has its own culture, meanwhile this is just fucking space mexico.
Aiden Collins
I mean they are at a scifi college in maybe another dimension, could be a dog that was genetically experimented on.
Adam Hill
I have no problem with art not being a 1:1 depiction of real stuff, what I do have a problem with is a fucking 20 page shit comic changing artist every five fucking pages. If the artists were good then there would be no problem, thing is, the art in this ranges from mediocre to bad.
And that's without mentioning the shit paneling and the terrible fight scenes.
Cameron Watson
Im a phone poster because im not near the pc lol. Huge fingers on touch-screen
Leo Cooper
>I think this comic's art looks bad
>OH SO YOU WANT EVERYTHING TO LOOK LIKE THE FUCKING VITRUVIAN MAN?
Calm the fuck down user, no one was actually saying that they want everything to look perfectly anatomically correct, it's just that those issues legitimately look unappealing. Stop making such a stupid strawman.
Gavin Perry
Onions bien.
Jaxson Rodriguez
Kevin Martinez
>space Puerto Rico
Fixed that for you, Riviera actually really doesn't like Mexicans.
Eli Bennett
Jason Hill
What i meant is that dude clearly knows how to draw bodies so either their referenced, or he knows construction pretty well, but the faces have no structure nor proportions. Pretty sure the garbage job at inking botched these even more but there is a clear problem with faces. I'm a comic artist myseld so i think i can spot these pretty easily.
Carter Murphy
Brayden Gray
Jackson Diaz
I forget how powerful mindless ones are supposed to be, but I assume they're stronger than a nerd with a parasol.
Chase Nelson
I wonder if this new character is going to be the villain that showed up at the end of last chapter.
Joseph Cooper
Nigga, his femur is longer than his torso the composition is flat and the pose stiff. Don't tell me this isn't garbage. The whole aesthetic it goes for is ruined by these mistakes. Go read fucking moebius and stuff like that. There is a clear difference between exageration and not knowing how to frame a pose.
Michael Bell
Oh hey a blonde white person.
Wonder where their moral alignment end up.
Nathan Cook
Berraca pitied the fool Sanar making all that planet nonsense.
Brandon Allen
Logan Nguyen
Camden Gomez
>what I do have a problem with is a fucking 20 page shit comic changing artist every five fucking pages. If the artists were good then there would be no problem, thing is, the art in this ranges from mediocre to bad.
No no. You shit on anatomy. I'm not going back and quoting you and myself just to get you to be honest. No comic should have more than two pencilers at most. Nobody would disagree with this. And so I didn't.
What I do disagree with is you randomly saying "the faces, oh my the faces" over and over again and then bringing up some dudes leg in a perfectly fine panel.
I hate that you know less about critically reading a comic book than the mindless fool who wrote this.
You would find Quitely or Tim Sale atrocious if it were in this book?
Grayson Perez
This is the most pathetic post on here.
If you've ever drawn you'd know bodies are just a collection of circles and tear drops. Hands, feet and faces are more intricate. It's very easy and extremely common for younger artists to do great with torsos and legs and be terrible with smaller appendages.
But again, this is very clearly a thread of people who know this is a bad comic but just do not know why in any way.
Cooper Wright
>What I do disagree with is you randomly saying "the faces, oh my the faces"
So what the fuck is my reaction supposed to be when I see fucking ugly faces in this piece of shit comic?
Also what the fuck are you doing here if all you're going to do is bitch about people shitting on fucking America?
Angel Campbell
Wait is her hair going through the back of that hoodie in the 2nd panel??
Jace Wood
It isn't flat or stiff at all. Particularly not the latter BECAUSE of the stretched anatomy.
>go read moebius
YOURE COMPARING THIS TO AN ALL TIME INTERNATIONAL GREAT WHO I PROMISE YOU, YOU COULDNT EXPLAIN HIS GREATNESS IF YOU TRIED.
YOU LARPING FAGGOTS ARE THE REASON PEOPLE LAUGH AT THIS PLACE
Gavin Moore
Trying way too hard now.
Thomas James
I think it's supposed to be spilling out of the hoodie.
James Morris
Thanks for keeping the thread bumped faggot.
Blake Baker
I'm here to ruin your shitty time because you're retarded and know less about comics than the people you're attempting to shit on.
This comic is terrible, you useless faggots don't know shit about comics and will never make one that will be published. It's sad that anyone thinks there problem in these issues isn't generally just because Rivera had literally never scripted anything in her life. She had no business being given a job.
Yet you faggots complain about perfectly serviceable art because you have no clue what makes art good or bad.
Owen Brown
Nah, you just didn't want to respond yet your autism dictated you reply.
>thanks for le bump
So you know nothing about comics or posting on Yea Forums? No surprise.
Jordan Allen
Oh no, who could've seen this development coming?
No, you're here to get easy (You)'s because you're a fucking attention seeking slut. Fine by me, it keeps the thread bumped and you get the attention that you very clearly want.
Tyler Evans
Dude, im reading this for the first time. I see the fucking writing is artocious, no pacing, no motives, stiff dialogues and characterd interactions. But you can't tell me the artists on the issues about that wonky boxing plot are terrible. Main artist on issue 1 and 2 clearly know what they're doing a'd the change of aesthetic between the issues kill the mood of this comic. And seeing how amateur the peniciling is on those issues about the black boxing girl is just jarring. I mean fuck, dare I say it, i like how rivera draws America, but when it's handed over to other pencillers this is garbage. Writing is shit, but the constant art shifts don't help either.
James Ramirez
>storytime of pain
>The actual pain is cause by the shitskin OP who knows fuckall about comics
That's a yikes from me dawg.
Adrian Gomez
Ok retard
Tyler Richardson
You are trying way too hard now, why don't you stick to defending the mediocre art?
Tyler Sanchez
>Rivera
>draws
Yeah nah you're retarded.
Lincoln Watson
>now
I just got here?
Bentley Fisher
>serviceable art
Oh man the standards on american comics.
Rivera knows how to draw but the rest is just looool
Jackson Phillips
Henry Rivera
IP count retard.
Brayden Cox
user had you posted here before you would realize bumps don't matter unless the thread is close to being clipped. So falling back on "thanks for the bump" is pathetic at best.
I'm also not bumping the thread. But continue.
Rivera isn't the artist. How can you say that twice and think you aren't painfully transparently new?
And you also seem unaware of what the word serviceable means.
Gavin Morgan
Quinones and rivera.
Then again you are just a seething dude because you dont like seeing people laughing at funny pictures
Ethan Reed
Lucas Carter
Proof it didn't change?
Because making the claim now is meaningless. It's also flatly untrue and based on you simply being a pussy about your SoP being painful because of you more than the comic.
Jackson Reyes
Jordan Hill
Rivera never touched a pencil.
Seriously are you this retarded? Have you ever touched a comic?
Brayden Moore
Is this serviceable art for you lol
Tyler Ross
>just a setthing dude
Is that like a burning man?
Use words to explain why it isn't.
William Torres
>this dipshit really thinks the writer is the artist
Anthony Powell
Rivera not Riviera.
Lucas Lee
Sorry about the delay, had to take a piss.
The last time it changed was an hour ago, and no one was defending this shit until you arrived.
Gavin Jackson
Oh sorry for the doubleposting. I wasn't talking about gabby riviera, i was talking about joe rivera. Sorry for the confusion.
Oliver Ross
No the last time it changed was when I first posted this:
Your delusion doesn't change that.
Luke Jenkins
You are really fucking sad, it's Sunday and you have nothing better to do other than shitpost in a SoP to get easy (You)'s
Aaron Young
Cooper Myers
Doing an SOP outside of SDCC is the epitome of craving (You)s
And there's no apostrophe needed.
Justin Brooks
>OP is such a faggot that discussing a comic in his SOP thread means he'all Ree like a tard
Pathetic.
Thomas Ortiz
Fucking hell x'andria's armor doesn't flatter her bodytype at all...
Daniel Sullivan
Daniel Jones
It is.
Explain why it isn't.
>Le its bad
No no, explain.
Landon Wilson
Sebastian Murphy
Just stop replying to the idiot, they're either just baiting at this point or too retarded to actually have a discussion, either way they aren't worth a (you).
Cameron Gutierrez
Christopher Roberts
Who would ever go into a thread shitting on an almost universally dilsiked comic to defend it to get easy replies?
Owen Bennett
It’s not serviceable art because it looks like shit and makes me want to kill
Ayden Clark
Asher Walker
you just know
Dominic White
Nolan Russell
Now my internet is trying to kill itself.
I blame America.
Sebastian Gonzalez
Kayden Price
>it's bad causenit offends me
You've proven you're a faggot.
Kayden White
Who SoPs outside of SDCC aside for newfags that want (You)s?
Brayden Allen
Lucas Cruz
Blake Johnson
It's amusing how all these diversity hires are actually barely those minorities. Like Willow Wilson is a white convert who didn't step foot in a mosque until she was in her 20s and wearing a hijab is just a fashion choice to her with little cultural or personal weight to it.
Liam Gonzalez
>LOL it's so bad
>BADD BADD
>LOL ITS SOOOOO BADDDDD
>the writing is atrocious the arts serviceable
>LOLL WHAT DO YOU WANT, (YOU)S!?
>ITS BAD BAD BAD
>GO READ THE GREATEST OF ALL TIME AND TELL ME THIS ISNT BAD
Robert Green
Henry Bell
Jason Fisher
Easton Robinson
Gavin Rivera
Xavier Hill
Nathaniel Lewis
Ryan Long
Isaiah Moore
Liam Collins
Have to take the dogs out, I'll be back in a while.
Evan Wood
I was honestly confused for a second when i saw the exhaust coming out of the bike.
Austin Robinson
Almost done now.
Jack Turner
Justin Roberts
I still can't get over the mythology. Two lesbian dieties had lesbian sex and their orgasm created the Marvel Universe. The best mythology Marvel has ever come up with.
Thomas Walker
There it is. THE page.
Cooper Turner
I thought that was just the lesbian dimension?
Aaron Nguyen
Carter Collins
Not the marvel universe, just the stupid Lesbian Spanglo universe America came from
Robert Martinez
Eli Price
Ryan Rivera
Benjamin Powell
Matthew Harris
Adrian Morris
oooh, fuck, all this time I've somehow confused myself. Oh well, still, top tier mythology.
Kayden Rogers
Adam Sullivan
Hot, lesbian goddess sex is not a bad way to create a universe, all things considered.
Asher Phillips
Forgot the image, my lack of sleep is getting the better of me.
Nolan Evans
Easton Cook
Gabriel Ross
Juan Ward
Samuel Hill
I'm happy I made this a miserable chore for OP.
Next time learn something about comics. Everyone should be sick of newfags giving this place a bad name.
Jaxon Smith
You didn't do anything, other than bumping the thread.
Chase Jones
Parker Ortiz
Hudson Gray
Jordan Foster
Benjamin Price
Justin Mitchell
Brandon Hill
SJWs don't write comics for people, they write it for themselves.
Nolan Garcia
Robots seriously? God damn it this is trite
Jason Ortiz
If it works the first time, do it a second and a third.
Xavier Reed
Just one more chapter to go.
Evan Garcia
I really like the Americabot design.
Cooper Morris
Easton Wood
Dominic Walker
David Baker
Ethan Wright
Yeah. Even crappy comic my sister wrote when she was 7 makes more sense than this shit.
Zachary Myers
Liam Bell
does the writer not know what cyborgs are or what?
Aaron Garcia
Parker Foster
Xavier Ward
Aaron Price
Caleb Barnes
Robert Long
>my power lies beyond your comprehension. my existence transcends everything you could possibly know of reality
is she fuckin yog sothoth who talks like that
Michael Adams
Adrian Powell
Asher Cook
Jayden Perez
Ryder Diaz
I still don't get what this is or how it is an improvement over her portals. Largely because it looks like a flying portal which I think fucking worse.
Wyatt Sanchez
Dylan Powell
Jose Russell
Alexander Cox
Anthony Howard
Robert Roberts
Charles Edwards
I'm almost free.
Aaron Lopez
Almost free
Colton Jones
you'll never truly be free user
Brandon Walker
Alexander Richardson
William Thompson
Asher Young
America is CUUUUTE
Matthew Gomez
Dylan Martin
Fuck America is ugly. Especially with her red nail polish and lipstick on her shit brown skin.
Ayden Jones
Jayden Jackson
Nolan Miller
Brandon Edwards
Nicholas Nelson
William Fisher
>you useless faggots don't know shit about comics and will never make one that will be published.
>y-you will never make anything good s-shut up
Every time, the same shit, word for word. Fuck off industry shill.
Hunter Sanchez
Jackson Harris
Classic.
Leo Smith
John Williams
Why is a dance group so eager to risk death over things?
Owen Brooks
Levi Thompson
Interdimentional school somehow has a bunch of white nationalists.
John Young
Carson Walker
Even on the last fucking chapter they pull stupid shit like this.
Brandon Gonzalez
Blake Wood
Aaron Collins
I don't think there's a single writing style I hate more than
>maybe if I add random spanish words to my character's dialogue they will be more convincingly brown
Asher Baker
Time to talk no jutsu the shit out of this bugmen.
Tyler Gray
And solved.
What a fucking joke.
William Scott
Jonathan Smith
Jaxon Torres
MADRIMAR AL RESCATE
Lincoln Stewart
You missed one!!!!!!!!!!
>America (2017-) 006-013.jpg
Benjamin Sullivan
What?
Colton Flores
And that was America, a comic filled with shit writing, constant changes in art which was mediocre at best and bad at worst, terrible characters, stupid plotlines, unsatisfying ends and a bunch of broken Spanish written by a person that pretended to be Puerto Rican.
The only thing that could be viewed as a good thing in this comic is the fact that it's the perfect example of how not to hire writers, write characters, plots, dialog, etc., and it deserves to be mocked for the rest of existence so that others may learn what the fuck you're not supposed to do.
Juan Reed
Please tell this thing sold like shit or worst than shit? I can't imagine any person no matter how shit their taste is would buy into this.
John King
It only lasted a year and got a Yea Forums bait letter on a chapter, does that sound to success to you?
Ryan Garcia
My bad.
Cooper Green
>does that sound to success to you?
Does that sound like success to you?
I need to fucking sleep.
Xavier Lewis
>a bunch of broken Spanish written by a person that pretended to be Puerto Rican.
John Leguizamo?
Jayden Lopez
Hey wait.
How come the Mindless Ones in this issue are shaped like actual humans with a neck and everything
but these Mindless One are using the classic no neck design? Is it too much to ask for a 12 issue comic to keep it’s villain designs consistent?
Josiah Butler
This all feels like the writer furiously masturbating
>oh yeah, she's just like me
>awesome hot latina girl who's a rad asskicker
>and she's from space, a space lesbian boricua who goes to a rad other dimension school where everyone else is also rad, dark skinned space lesbians
>and she punches Hitler and all those nasty, tiki-torch using racist kids
>and everywhere she goes there's other rad girls who want to get in her pants
>also, she's super mystical and a total goddess
Ian Howard
You know what I think it is an ok idea for America to latch onto latin america culture but it completely fucks it up when you make her home town just happen to be space mexico and you leave out that she isn't actually latina when you advertise her.
Christian Diaz
Honest question, is there any worse ending to an “action” comic than “It was alllllllllllllllll just a big ol’ misunderstanding”?
Nolan Carter
>sun cycles
"Days". They're called "days", you pretentious cuntsmear. J. Hieronymus CHRIST, I hate it when hack writers pull this shit.
Adam Cook
But the alien culture she actually came from is Latina, so uh...????
Camden Davis
AltGeekPepe
Jaxson Ramirez
>Because I fucking hate myself.
And that's your right, but i just dont understand what we ever did to you.
Wyatt Flores
I see it as an allegory for fake latinas like her writer. Her writer was raised in the US and she doesnt speak spanish. Her entire heritage is summed up within her surname and the mixed bag of expressions she's heard from the actually hispanic people she's been exposed to, people from all around latin america so it's not even a little genuine.
America is her power fantasy, being a beautiful and powerful lesbian with a higher purpose.
Michael Harris
Women talk too much jesus fucking christ.
Chase Davis
You caught your grammar error ao you're already better thanevery modern Marvel editor
Lucas Baker
Jesus fucking Christ between the chin and the weird bulge in the bottom panel she has it makes America look like she’s pre-op.
Cameron James
Ah there it is. :D
Noah Anderson
Don't Marvel use editors anymore? Is it a kind of oppression maybe? Correcting writing is probably seen as microaggressions.
Jack Howard
What am I looking at here?
Jace Martinez
Why would a gay guy create a universe entirely out of lesbians?
Elijah Morgan
I remember we told the user not to mention The room because it was so fucking obvious but he did it anyway and that made it better because they didn't know Wtf he was talking about.
This also killed America's letter pages, people made a big deal out of this, it was hilarious.
Kayden Thomas
jesus
Isaiah Jones
Maybe it was a Monkey's Paw type of deal
>I wish for a gay universe!
>Your wish is granted
>Girls kissing girls! Not kissing you!
>NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
Levi Baker
>Demonixs
Demonios is already gender neutral, this bitch needs to learn her own language.
Cooper Gomez
>Plane of lesbians that worship a gay man
Jonathan Perry
The space lesbian gods didn't create the lesbian dimension, the created a planet of space latinos that was attacked by space chupacabras, which is why America's grandmother punched open a portal into the duke dimension, where her daughter hooked up with one of the magic rugmunchers, who was also princess of that dimension.
And to think, all Joe Casey wanted was for Ms. America to be a spicy latina flying brick, who didn't wear underwear.
Oliver Collins
Half of them look like they would much rather be anywhere else.
Jace Cooper
Interdimensionalist liberal arts school named after a progressive US supreme court justice with a student body comprised almost entirely of non-white people. It'd be like finding a League of the South branch at UC Berkeley.
Brody Jackson
This was painful to read. Thank you.
Wyatt Scott
Gabby is Nuyorican, if the place she depicts looks stereotypical it's because she's ignorant of her own culture and so is rhe artist.
Easton Fisher
You made me read the first chapters, after that I wasn't going to go through hell by myself.
Brayden Brown
Wiccan wanted a spicy Latina faghag, but also didn't want to deal with a bunch of straight girl drama at the gay bar.
Bentley Morris
Yeah this makes no fucking sense. Just make her a superhuman latina growing up in like puerto rico since it's almost a fucking us state or something. Does it really need that convoluted shitty lore? No. It feels like gabby just wanted to write brown superman except she has really no fucking clue what she's doing. It's amazing how bad it is. The art on the boxing subplot being subpar is the icing on the cake. I'm baffled something this bad on all levels was ever greenlit by a marvel exec. This is just so damn bad lol
Ryder Parker
this isn't even close to Villalobos' best work, nor is it even particularly good
Aaron Gonzalez
Are they talking about Paolo Rivera? I don't think he drew anything in this. But he is a good artist.
Benjamin Young
Yes, that entire retarded argument ensued because one retard didn't understand who the fuck the other guy was talking about.
Matthew Wood
His dad's an inker who worked on it and Paolo helped out on some pages but yeah I think that's it
Tyler Harris
Gabby never learned Spanish.
Luke Mitchell
No, they just created one planet, a planet of space latinos, brimming with latin men and women. The lesbian dimension that America comes from was made By Wiccan after he goes full demiurge at some point. America's grandmother and one of her mothers fled from space latin planet to the lesbian dimension when the space chupacabras attacked. Now, how the fuck an alien latina from a planet with males and females managed to breed with a magical construct from a dimension of only lesbians will forever be a mystery, but they did somehow. Then they died sealing off their dimension, probably to make sure that none of the male space latinos made it in their no dicks allowed universe.do
I'm left with two burning questions, why would a gay god create a universe full of lesbians, instead of a gay mans paradise? And why would a pair of lesbian cosmic beings create a planet of space latinos?
Gabriel Bailey
>Yes please all of the flopping
Now listen here Alanis Morissette ya dumb biatch, if you want learn what irony is read Gabby she's an undisputed master of it.
Ethan Evans
This is so fucking weird seeing the original panel and not the edit.
Dominic Roberts
That's pretty much what she was before Gillen got his hands on her, and tried to make her a Wonder Woman counterpart.
Angel Brooks
Gabby was likely hilariously late with scripts
Jaxson Ward
what edit?
Ian Rivera
...
Brody Edwards
the Riveras are the inkers, and they're objectively awful
Adrian Harris
SOPs happen all the fucking time outside of SDCC you goddamn newfag retard
Brayden Stewart
Don't give him any more (You)'s.
Julian King
lots of people
Brandon Taylor
oh
ngl that's kinda hot
Jonathan Smith
It stinks.
Jordan James
>why would a gay god create a universe full of lesbians, instead of a gay mans paradise?
Because he didn't want to put up with the unending sleaze of gay man universe.
>And why would a pair of lesbian cosmic beings create a planet of space latinos?
Didn't want to put up with lesbian bullshit.
Brandon Scott
This panel and “literally intrigued and in awe at both of them” will haunt America forever, won’t they? That’s hilarious and horrifying all at once.
Camden Walker
If America Chavez ever gets in to the MCU this should be her intro tune in homage to Gabby.
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Jackson Sanchez
That's what happens when you let someone like Gabby Rivera write a solo series, shit like this will never go away.
Robert Myers
Carson James
That fucking face in the fifth panel. Holy shit