My original Yea Forums idea

This is Clem Fandango, a flamboyant 27 years old radio star. He's famous in the whole world for his charm, charisma and magnetic personality.
Clem is homosexual and extremely open about it with people. He also tries to push tolerance and positive LGBTQ+ representation to everyone around him.
Clem is usually cheerful and easy going but unbeknownst to everyone, this fabulos star had a traumatic past - he's been tormented by his family ever since the age of 10, once he realized that he's homosexual.
He was never attracted to girls. He always felt something for the other boys. He's been bullied by his classmates as well, often being called a "fag". Once his father found out about his sexuality - he was about to disown him.
Clem was forced to marry a woman in order to make his family happy.
In order to escape the unwanted marriage, Clem Fandango had to run away from home & start a new life.

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op is stinky check my 6

That's background fluff that literally anyone can fart out in five minutes and tells me absolutely nothing about what your "idea" actually is

OP, this idea is gay.

Sounds pretty fucking gay.

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You just used a picrew maker to create this

You posted this last week, faggot.

Is this supposed to be a comic or cartoon? All you've done is create some shitty character with a shitty design and nothing else.

this is clem fandango can you hear me?

I mean, the slippery slope has only ever been proven to be a legitimate argument.

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nice try stone

Oh lovely, I totally don't see this getting spammed as bait twice a week for the rest of forever
Shit, it's probably bait NOW

You can post this shit all you want, it won't make your parents accept your faggotry.

Shill will be shill and break any place to discuss.
Copied from previous post, cause fuck you.
Correlation between pushing agenda and quality of media can be seen if plot is not good enough for audience and it's filled with propaganda.
So by shortening "pushing aspect" still gap to fill can be seen and would be used for upgrade and rewrite plot which would be more acceptable.
Call me homophobe despite I'm not scared or anything like that and /pol/ish poster.
Also, being triggered about woman with fetus on head.

What's the idea though?

Where's the story?

Like are you telling a story about his career? The compromises and stresses of the entertainment industry? Radio's in a rough spot right now, is this guy in traditional broadcast media or is he a podcaster or e-celeb made good? Those are different stories.

Is it personal? Is the personal thing being a political figure (which is ALSO public), his family drama, or his school drama? Why is his family trying to arrange a marriage when he's already rich and famous? Is he from a culture that practices that heavily? He came out super early, does that have anything to do with it? Is this a story touching on the psychosexual trauma of going a whole puberty cycle openly gay?

What relationships has he had? Dude seems like chickenhawk bait with the super woke morals and his whole personality being the LGBT movement. Is the story about that? You say he's gay and into politics but what does that mean? Local? National? Is his radio show a platform for the movement, and which faction IN the LGBT movement is he a part of?

If he's a rich radio star why does he need to run away from home? Why the fuck can a family he hates tell him what to do? Is the girl a character at all, and why is she agreeing to this? Is THAT the story?

What I am trying to say is that these are a bunch of random ass traits you've thrown into a fucking highlight reel, none of which tell a natural story. You need to focus on what this character is being used for and retool your pitch around that. Consider some character flaws, too, they tend to be your strongest narrative hooks.

Faggy and bad

comics & cartoons are for tales of small Dwarves who shit bigger than themselves and toil in very thin tunnels for 20 hours without any light at a time

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As long as in the end, his wife fucks him into being a good husband and man of the house, then maybe we can start talking

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Yeah, where the fuck is the art of the wife? I want her to be a thicc as fuck amazonian that snu snu's the rainbow right out of his faggot ass

I hope both OP and this post are copied from another site

Yea Forums, if you look at your ceiling RIGHT NOW, you'll see the word "gullible" written above you in big bright letters.

You idiotic newfags! I only created this OC when I was watching Toast of London with Matt Berry (aka Buttwitch from Twelve Forever) and I heard the guy saying "This is Clem Fandango. Can you hear me Clem Fandango?".
I just thought that it would be fun to create a flamboyant character with that name.i also used Picrew to make that picture (which literally took me 2 minutes).

>Consider some character flaws, too
I thought most of the post was about his flaws.

Yeah, I can hear you clem fandango

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year of the rabbit was better

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I have this idea where leprechauns are trying to get rainbows back from gay people.

>white male protagonist

dropped

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But what are their pronouns?

Xim, schlop, florp

XIP XOP XOOPETY BOP!

This is OP, a flamboyant 27 years old shit poster. He's famous in the whole world for his charm, charisma and magnetic lips while perusing glory holes.
OP is homosexual and extremely open about it with people. He also tries to push penises and LGBTQ+ representation to everyone around him.
OP is usually cheerful and easy going but unbeknownst to everyone, this fabulos fruity mc gay-gay had a traumatic past - he's been tormented by /pol/ ever since the age of 26, once he realized that he's homosexual.
He was never attracted to girls. He always felt something for the other boys. He's been bullied by other anons as well, often being called a "fag,” and told to “stop showing your penis to people in public.” Once his father found out about his sexuality - he wasn’t surprised,
and encouraged his son to embrace himself. Clem forced himself into a hollow straight relationship, even though his family had already voiced acceptance for him to, and then became angry when he realized he couldn’t gain brownie points from his family emotionally abusing him.
In order to keep his primadonna lifestyle going, Clem Fandango had to run away from home, burning bridges with all his familial supports, and start a new life largely oriented with truck stops and wall holes in Denny’s washrooms.

Ah fuck I missed some names. Whatever.

"Dis dude here is super ghey and his family doesnt approve but he's still, like, super ghey and shit"

That's not even a character idea you moron, you just gave your character a sexual orientation and an occupation, everything else in your post is fluff explaining what a stereotypical gay man is and what the average life experience of a walking gay stereotype is like

Sounds like video needs to kill the radio star

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>off by one
lmao
now check this 2

This

This is my character Benchauv, and he is a powerful and strong character with a moving and great story, as he is happy about the upcoming genocide! you could learn from his worth and depth, OP

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Congrats OP, you wrote Pandering LGBT Comic © #2590.

You fags are insufferable, you should just kill yourselves already. Your stories are so shitty, generic and full of lecturing.

NigHer and porchmonkHe

I thought it was clem fandagos freind who went for a sex change in season 3?

He's cute. Does he crossdresses?