Thoughts on my Yea Forums idea?

This is Claude '"Diamond" Jeffers.Diamond is also known as "Mr Fabulous".He is a 19 years homosexual boy who works as a model who works for the Anderson fashion agency,currently owned by Mathew "Matt" Anderson,the eldest son of the family .His parents died and now the entire business is hanging on his shoulders.Matt is 32 years old and has a very serious stern attitude due to his parents' death.
Diamond on the other hand,is always cheerful,happy,flamboyant and overly excited - perfect opposite personalities.
Matt thought for a long time that he's straight...until he met Diamond.He suddenly started questioning his sexuality.He tried to repress his feelings for him at first,but upon seeing him walking around the studio only in his underwear - he could no longer hold back.
Diamond and Matt start a relationship,but unbeknownst to Matt - Diamond,the happy go lucky star ,has had a sad backstory.Turns out that his father has been harassing him every day upon finding out that he's homosexual,hence why he had to run away from home.

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stop making gay shit i get enough of that irl comics and cartoons are my escapism

I want to fuck his butthole with my tongue

This is Matt btw

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It's very cliche and predictable, but people will like it if it includes porn

Remember to include an accurate portrayal of the homosexual community.

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I like how every single aspect of the characters and story is related to the characters' sexuality and nothing more: flamboyantly gay, gay in denial, homophobia...

I think you should kill yourself

are gays people?
why is there no proof of this?
its a simple question.

Straight people would never do this

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Not as often.

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Fuck offfffff nobody wants you here you fucking mentally ill faggot tranny

>A majority of one population does terrible shit
>Oh yeah?! But did you know a small percent of this population also does terrible shit?

>disagree
>YOU ARE THE THING I HATE
Neither of those things.
ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pubmed/1556756

>This suggests that the resulting proportion of true pedophiles among persons with a homosexual erotic development is greater than that in persons who develop heterosexually.
So gays are more likely to be diddlers?

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But more heterosexuals are already diddlers.

So you admit homos are more likely to be pedos

Meant for

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This is Paul Jeffers - 47 years old and retired military man and Diamond's father.He is a though almost-cruel man who has always had a deep hatred for anything out of the regular.His wife died of cancer when Diamond was only 8 years old. Upon finding out that his son likes wearing makeup and girls' clothes ,he was beyond furious and gave his son the biggest beatdown of his life. At the age of 12,Diamond realized that he's attracted to boys and he had his very first kis with a male classmate under a tree in his backyard.Upon Diamond' father seeing them, he locked Diamond in his room & beat him up so bad,he almost bled.He locked him in his room,away from everything.Diamond managed to escape one day and ran away from to get away from everything.

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Because they're a bigger population you retard! Of course there'll be more hetero pedos! But per capita you fags diddle kids way more!

>Military vet looks like a bishonen fuckboy
Sure, why not?

I swear to god your reply was different just a second I go. Less erratic. Was the other reply deleted? It had percentages and shit.

Why are they in different styles? Why does one have asian writing next to him and the other has western writing? Did you just randomly take this art from other people, or did you commission drawings of your characters from two different artists?

Art’s a big part of Yea Forums media. Your story is already kinda weak and gay, but even of it were awesome, you have to think about where the art is coming from.

That was me.

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This is Myra Fitzpatrick - she is a 26 years old fashion model who works for the rival agency.She is vain and full of herself.Since she was born,she was cursed with the ability to turn people with impure desires for her into stone.
Her very first encounter with Diamond surprised her because thanks to his infinite gayness,her powers just wouldn't work for him.

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He was the barrack twink.

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Picrew,my dude.It's a website that allows you to create different characters.

If you want to make a cartoon or comic, maybe you should learn to draw.

Do you know what per capita means you dumb fag

Hmm, it’s alright but I just prefer supernatural or science fiction stuff in my cartoons.

That all sounds like an idea destined to go wrong in so many ways.
Here's my advice: scrap the whole thing and try to pitch something else.

Well, it does have a lady that can turn people into stone. Four character sheets in.

Seriously, if you’re gonna have supernatural elements in your story, you should probably mention them right off the bat unless you’re looking to put it in at the end as a big twist.