Chapter 72: Page 5
>Renard!
Chapter 72: Page 5
>Renard!
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Tom... why?
Noice!
We've seen this creature in the forest before as well, or at least something like it. This all is very reminiscent of stuff from Chapter 44.
Hello, here is another story for you all. It has sexual content and snuff in it.
pastebin.com
Please let me know what you think, even if you hate it very much.
zimmy is not on this page
go away
So I guess Kat and Andrew aren't with them.
The Annies look so awful in that last panel, but hey, wrestling with Parley, I can get behind that.
No, I like Gunnerkrigg.
then why do you make awful stories where they all kill themselves
go away you crazy man
Am I going crazy, or have the pages this chapter felt like they're missing additional in between pages?
I think that's intentional.
do you still think this is a good comic
Your fetish is both confusing and repulsive to me, but I have to admit that this is quite well written.
Grammar is good, prose is good, dialogue is good. It's also nicely formatted.
The the beginning of the Russian roulette game manages to build some effective tension, but this deflates as it goes on.
Your ability to describe half a dozen people blowing their brains out in fairly distinct ways in such a short piece is admirable.
My main criticism is that you didn't included an extended sequence where the annies have a passionate make out session. The way they were looking at each other in the accompanying image led me to hope that I might get that out of your story before reaching the snuff part.
Yes, though I think we knew more about where we were going when Jeanne was still around. Right now it feels a bit meandering but I hope that's just because the plot hooks have yet to come.
Thank you, you seem very reasonable. Annie x Annie makeouts are not outside my interest, I just didn't manage to squeeze them in here. I'll take it under advisement if/when I find time for another fanfic.
don't write anymore stories please
we switched to Reynard and he's getting a call from annies
Thanks god, the Annies arrived just in time for preventing anything actually interesting from happening. That was a close one.
Don't think is it's the same one. Or even the same kind.
i agree, annie 1 and 2 should just go away and the comic should be all about zimmy doing really cool zimmy things
Based Annie ruinning everything as usual
>Two big, brutish forest creatures
>they have to be the same
That'sracist.jpg
But yeah, would've been better if it was. Tom could've turned a non-character into recurring
I'm leaning towards it being that guy (or at least his cousin) if only because we also had Wisps come up, and a Wisp was in that chapter too.
This to me seems like they're either in the Forest or in one of the trees, which has Forest creatures in it.
>Hey guys here's a fanfic
>Mfw I want to fap so open the doc
>Kids blowing their brains out
Well a fine howdy doo to you too.
i think only crazy people read this comic
>has Roulette in the title, pic has girl loading a gun
>said in post 'has sexual content and snuff'
I mean, at a certain point it's no longer on me
or you could throw me for a loop and have it turn out that's exactly what you were looking for
No it's really just me and imaa, but we are both very abnormal and also creative types.
I've written about other things too, shows and games I've liked as well as original works.
Speaking of, I think I've done enough namefagging for now. I'll disappear until I've got something new to bother you all with.
go away forever
when are the double annies going to sensually tease and worship rey's red doggy dick with their lips and tongues
they're not going to do that
I enjoyed this. Nice writing.
That seems unlikely. Tom has been forshadowing it pretty hard.
She isn't into dog dicks. She likes green elf dicks.
that's basically just a different flavor of dog dick
That doesn't sound very scientific.
>muscle Parley on display
Well *I* like this page
They're definitely going to do that.
See
It's good to read the archives all in one go.
Not so good waiting for updates.
Tom's still pretty bad at drawing it, but yeah, I agree!
That pazkat and annieannie is REALLY cute
I wonder whose fault it is that they're all split up in this strange place.
I bet it's Kat's again.
She really ought to be punished for these fuck ups.
it would be better if every page included a zimmy
Is it just me or does anything the author draws, except for annie, looks like shit?
I feel like it's referencing something.
Charlie the Unicorn
he's really good at drawing zimmy
How would Zimmy react to being called beautiful?
She'd blush and get really flustered and stutter and tell you fuck off and maybe bite you
she wouldn't blush
>That pazkat and annieannie is REALLY cute
Agreed, nice to have those scenes separate. here's a crop followed by an edit attempt.
Yes she would! She has really pale skin because she's an albino or some shit and her face would get super red!
That's fun!
Is Zimmy albino? Like, legally and medically? We've never seen her out in the sun before, she always seems like she avoids bright lights.
Also, what's with her teeth? She ever gonna get those capped or whatever it's called?
No, she's not albino.
A) She would not blush because she wouldn't be embarrassed, just disgusted.
B) Even if she were to blush, I think her cheeks would turn a darker shade of gray, not red. It just wouldn't look right.
C)She won't blush, because it just wouldn't look right.
my preferred concept
thanks tom
You're welcome, Bradley.
What would make Zimmy blush? Like what if the end of Zimmy's dirty green skirt got caught on an escalator, and it came right off, and everyone saw her kawaii pantsu?
kys immediately
what if you ran into zimmy in the hallway and you knocked into each other and she landed ontop of you and she went kyaaaa
I would go owo what's this, then scream "I'm pickle RIIIIIICK" and naruto-run away.
improved
I like the pendant being used as an earring.
Very fashionable.
We need more cute, sfw, innocent double Annie stuff.
Gross
Reminde rthe at my weif Zeta is the main chaeacter of the cominc.
this is your brain on zimmy
don't do zimmy
>Annies in the last panel
They should be drawn like this from now on
Are you going insane?
Is this the second act of the Zimmyfag Storyline?
They look like they're from Assigned Male or something.
If you really want this, I want you to know you are a sinful person who desperately needs Jesus.
One of the Annies is transitioning before our very eyes.
Dressing more masculine and all.
So? Half the girls in this comic are lesbians and half of them are adopting the male role. Zimmy and Kat have been doing that since the beginning.
Tomboys aren't automatically SJW shit, ya dunce.
You poor, blinded retard.
Are traps sjw shit?
Your mind is so warped and you don't even know it.
Tragic.
Are they, though?
I shant dignify this with a response
I think tomboys are hot.
or like Amelia Bedelia, draw requests fulfilled more innocently?
Amelie Bedelia?
Traps, too.