Spongebob, Sonic, Ed, Edd, and Eddy in the NoEnd House Storytime
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There's 47 pages so I hope you brought snacks
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I have a few questions about just this one page
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Oh, trust me. One of the best parts is up next.
The girl is more important in the sequel
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I couldn't make this shit up if I tried
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We're coming up on another highlight
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I should mention that all these have like 1 comment, and they're all from the same user. This is what she has to say here:
"*starts to whimpers like a young wolf pup* :("
See, I wasn't sure at first, but this right here is all the validation I need to know I'm gonna have a good time.
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This shit is something else
Thanks for reading along, user. Great that you're having a good time
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Fuck meant to reply to
19/47 pages and I'm already more lost than I was at page 3
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Also: More commentary from that one user:
"*my very own 25 year old adult werewolf p.o.v note to self:NEVER mess with Eddy the rich guy when he's mad/angry*"
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Oh, this shit'll go off the rails, just you wait
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>"you can't leave!"
>"shut up monster"
>monster fucking disappears
this actually made me chuckle
Ok I'll bite. What the fresh hell is this shit and where did it come from?
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We're more than halfway there. You guys having fun yet?
What the fuck
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DeviantArt. A reading of it popped up in my YouTube recommended one day and I knew that it is something for the ages.
But the weekend of pain is NEXT weekend user.
Still, I want to see where this goes.
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Another highlight coming up
Was it Brendaniel? Has he read this?
>DeviantArt.
This is the kind of jewel I am always looking for. I mean, I still found the Sonic with AIDS comic, but man, this is some wild stuff.
>Deviantart
of course something of this quality would come from there
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Here's a fun drinking game, take a shot every grammar error, although that might kill you
Alice x Spongebob is best ship
That pussy can't even handle EARLY Tails Gets Trolled.
Oh my holy God.
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No, it was read by the author of this, I don't think it got many views. I tried posting it in DA Autism threads but I don't think anyone saw it there.
>no end house
And we are already at the creepy pasta
How long is this OP?
That sucks. I heard he also gets his Yea Forums read stuff from reddit.
Why do they own a triceratops? What the hell is this?
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>No tv and No beer make Homer crazy
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The best part is next. I promise
This whole thing is loosely based on the pasta.
It's 47 pages
Your guess is as good as mine
This just can't be real autism. Surely this is manufactured?
That's what I would like to ask
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THE FUCKING ANNOYING ORANGE
what the FUCK is with autists and Serena from Pokemon
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Oh no, this is genuine, 100% authentic DeviantArt autism.
looks like authentic autism to me
NO
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I CAN'T BELIEVE IT! THIS JUST MADE MY TOP 10 TISM COMICS! THANK YOU OP!
>Homer Simpson
>Jack Torrance
>The Annoying Orange
I don't even know what to say
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Eddy in KH when?
Another highlight is up next
If you want Yea Forums junk reposted on other sties, Creepswork is the one to go to.
He has a submission email just to get some of the rarer stuff sent to him to avoid reading what everyone else has read. I get him to read a cap I made, so I know he does check it from time to time.
Man I don't have enough appropriate reaction images to properly react to this crazy shit.
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They're back
No problem, man. What else is in your top 10?
I don't know what to say either
I don’t even know how to feel about this.
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>annoying orange
How is that channel still going?!
Thanks for posting this in the autism thread friend, I needed this
Page 37. We're at the home stretch, boys.
Also, THE FUCKING KOOL AID MAN
This just crossed a new line.
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>SUDDENLY A FUCKING KEYBLADE
This is getting interesting.
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>SUDDENLY FUCKING SATAN
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>TGT
>Sonichu
>Sonic high school
>my immortal
>this one I can't remember the name of but I remember clitorasaurus
>that scooby doo jojo thing but I'm not sure if that's autism
>night of the were ed
>night of the were ed 2
>my immortal ed
>now THIS
No particular order.
Retard me forgot image, sorry.
>The Kool Aid Man shows up, explodes, and also kills Homer, Jack, and the Orange
I don't have a proper reaction image for this
But why did they use that horrific version instead of calssic koolaid man?!
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I like how Jack is making that death howl like at the end of the shining.
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Good thing the comic comes with one
Page 44. We're almost done
>he didn't go fast
>he was too slow
Page 45. Our heroes are rewarded
I fucking knew Holiday Inn couldn't be trusted.
>Misspells "Hey" twice in a row
>a render from Super Sonic X Universe
WE REACHED ADVANCED AUTISM HERE
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OP YOU IDIOT. YOU DID IT AGAIN
FUCK FORGOT IMAGE AGAIN
I think the autism is so powerful, it's affecting OP
Please tell me someone made this on purpose as a troll
OH SHIT
Page 47, the final page.
Here's that reading I mentioned earlier: youtu.be
Thank you to everyone here for sticking with me, I hope you'll stay along a little longer.
Unironically a pretty good adaptation of that pasta
Thanks OP,I will. So this based on a pre-existing story or creepypasta or something?
Don't you fucking tell me there's a sequel
this comic almost surpasses Sonichu and TGT in how gold it is
Did you think I was done?
Turns out the fucker made a sequel.
I haven't read this one, so I'm as clueless as you guys here.
Buckle your fuckles and get some snacks, this is gonna be a wild ride
Thanks user, you sure topped pic related.
GOD YES
YES
Hype.
Pure hype.
Lets fucking do this
Its not like i wanted to sleep anyway
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Spongebob's getting anime pussy.
Yes it is, It's (loosely) based on the NoEnd house.
The Channel Zero adaptation was great. I wish that show wasn't fucking dead.
THIS BITCH IS FROM FUCKING BAKUGAN
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I don't think I'll be able to get it all out tonight. THERE ARE 76 FUCKING PAGES
>76 pages
THIS JUST GOT EVEN BETTER
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Y'know what, fuck it. We're doing it all tonight, the things I do for this site.
yay! Fuck sleeping!
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Sorry if this is coming out at a slower pace, first time reading this
Lucky for you that I have absolutely no life!
do it faggit
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There's a fucking transformer now
Ohhhhhhhh, she's from Bakugan.
She's evil transsexual or something isn't she?
VOCHO AMARILLO
Also
I TOLD YOU
FUCKING BAKUGAN
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Chomp chomp
>beep that place
Alright, I'm tapping out. I need sleep.
Have fun OP.
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Oh shit, really? I never watched Bakugan so I'm not familiar here
This is actually based.
ITS FUCKING BUMBLEBEE
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Clunk
I'll try
>juggle juggle
this duology is based
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>Sonic got so scared he turned 3D
>paper ghost
>not scary
Bitch...
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What the fuck is even happening, this shit is hurting my brain
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OH SHIT
Oh great, now we have SCPs AND Current Spongebob writting
>a Patosaurus
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What is "The Scooby-Doo Jojo thing" and where can I find it
Also Sonic High School is an intentional meme my friend
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We're moving, boys.
>a patosaurus
is it bad I actually expected this?
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I gotta say the perspective created in some of these panels is very impressive
I forgot the name of the scooby doo thing but there's threads about it sometimes also I can't keep track of what's genuine autism and what's fake anymore.
>doesnt know the horrors of Five Nights At Freddy's High School
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Open the door, get on the floor, everybody walk the dinosaur.
Why is this all prehistoric stuff?
Oh my God it's that future earth from that discovery channel special from over a decade ago.
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>so... ...cold
>sno... ...wy
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A common interest for autists is Dinosaurs, I believe. I don't know why.
THIRD TIME IN A ROW OP.
THREE MORE TIMES AND YOU'RE OUT.
FUCK FORGOT IMAGE FOR THE 3RD TIME
I think it was a time travel room
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This shit is fucking with my head, man.
This is going to run the risk of me seeming overly autistic, but I actually know the answer.
Austism "special interests" (stuff which sperglords know entirely too much about) often connect to childhood interests, such as trains, Lego, or, well, dinosaurs. That's why if you ever meet someone who knows a bunch about trains, they probably have ASD.
Man this shit is all from The Future Is Wild.
wikipedia.org
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>SPLAM!
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WHAT THE ACTUAL FUCK IS HAPPENING
CHOCOLATE FISH DINOS
AM I HIGH
WE'RE HITTING MAXIMUM TISM LEVELS
Good thing they had some convenient giant broccoli for that triceratops
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good thing I stayed
>CHOCOLATE FISH DINOS
Autism comics are a blessing. I’ve made it a serious hobby to collect them and read them. These are gems for sure. Thanks OP.
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Satan girl's back
>vore
we have truly reached advanced 'tism levels
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but now that you're here
I lost
the game
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Boom daba
BOOM DABA
WHAT THE FUCK IS GOING ON?
T H E
G A M E
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I have no clue what's gonna happen next
Hey. Cut that out.
Sonic changing into completely different art styles is fucking killing me.
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>more dinosaurs
of course.
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Is this a webcomic or a fucking documentary? Give us something good.
So far, first one was way better.
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I bet it's not Spongebob and it's another fucking dinosaur.
>only 2 left in the world
Excuse me?
>That odd they don't look like elephants
No shit sherlock
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Yeah, right. What did she mean by this?
WHY THE FUCK SHE DIDN'T BRING HYDRANOID
HE COULD EASILY BEAT THE DINOS
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Spongebob is going to fucking die
I think he's referring to that there's only two living elephant species
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I'm getting fed up with the dinos here. The first one at least had variety.
Oh. That makes sense.
Boom Daba!
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I FUCKING TOLD YOU THE SPONGEBOB WAS A DINO! I CALLED IT!
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jesus fuck, when's the demon girl or the weird door creature gonna pop up again?
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Place your bets, which dino is going to win
This can be exploitable.
What is this kids fixation on prehistoric aminals?
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Spoilering because dino gore
Oh the demon girl already showed up, but I agree, this is boring
Am i reading a creppypasta adaptation or just a Jurassic Park fanfiction
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autism. it's as simple as that.
Dinohell has gotta stop soon, right?
Bring back orange
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RIP dino
f a t a l i t y
>ow that's going to hurt forever
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I'm with you guys, the original was fun to laugh at, but this is just tedious. Hopefully he can salvage it
bitch better find the next door already
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Nice last frame. Nice arm.
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Oh, thank god, all the dinosaurs are dead.
Alice, what are you going to do with that tiny ass knife?
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>ah shit another dinosaur
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WE'RE FINALLY OUT OF DINOSAUR HELL
FUCKING HALLELUJAH
>Bumblebee will turn into a Dinobot
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finally, the sperging can make way for more actual plot
>ANOTHER FUCKING DINOSAUR
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WHAT THE FUCK
FUCKING NEPTUNE
This shit might be saved, boys.
You forgot about Serena. We already know she can turn into a dinosaur and she's probably about to show up again soon
we gotta be out of dino hell for sure
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Neptune just broke the law by breaking and entering
Shut up I don't want to think about dinosaurs right now
Please, we need a lesbian scene
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We're getting a shower scene boys
OH SHIT THEY GON' FUCK
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WHAT THE FUCK
FUCKING CHEESE
Spongebob is going to be heartbroken
OH SHIT
So in regards to the SpongeBob, Sonic, Ed, Edd and Eddy in NoEnd House lore, where does Alice's journey take place in chronological relation? We know it's a few hours afterwards, but the house apparently seems to have time warping abilities. Any chance Alice will actually meet the titular protagonists?
Spongebob Squarecuck
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The comic is salvaged
It saved itself
Fucking Cheese
It salvaged itself in the best way, too
>AND I GOING TO PUT IT IN YOUR ANUS
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THE FUCKING TANK
Was neptune cheese then. Fucking what
Yeah,I'm thinking it's back.
Getting LMAC vibes here boys
Im gonna miss it
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I guess
>no ENF
Fucking shit
And Cheese was a Tank
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Neptune is gonna fucking die
Guess not
The power of illusions
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A dino snake, I'm not even mad.
atleast it's something slightly different
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The ride's not over
It was worth suffering through the dinosaurs
I’m riveted
WHERE THE FUCK IS HYDRANOID
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Guess who's back
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Spongebob's back
I swear if he's a fucking dino
I'm putting my bets on the room being a dinosaur
Ha ha she is inside spongebob. Heh, sex.
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He wasn't a dinosaur but they killed one
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Holy shit they fucking destroyed that dinosaur
Is this the power of autism?
What the fuck lmao
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She's covered in dino blood, hot
That was one of the only dinos that was minding its own business, why'd he get such a gruesome death?
jesus christ, what??
and there's still 10 pages of this left
I can't stop laughing. I'm crying.
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We're almost at 69 boys! Here's hoping the next page is a lesbian sex scene
spongebob and the boys are fuckin in the next room
Someone archive this thread and find the link to the deviantart account.
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Patrick was behind it the whole time
Still better than Disney's twist villains
>chocolannodons
SCREW YOU OP, YOU OWE ME A NEW PAIR OF SIDES
Page 70, we now know where the gang was the whole time
We got some good reaction images out of this comic, didn't we, boys?
>who were you expecting?
another dinosaur?
>There's no good, Alice
>Just me
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We're almost done
>let me start by saying patrick star was addicted to heroin
kek this is off to good start
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PATRICK IS FUCKING DEAD
There's no way he originally planned this far ahead.
Holy fuck, the stories were taking place at the same time. This is actually a somewhat-respectable twist.
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I bet a dinosaur comes out of patrick's corpse
Holy fucking shit
Absolute fucking kino twist
Poor alice was the key to all of this
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WHAT THE FUCK
SPOOKY
DRY BONES
The later part of this is on par with the OG
:(
she could avoid these by BRINGING FUCKING HYDRANOID
REEEEEEEE
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This is great
This is the best Spongebob/Sonic/Ed, Edd, and Eddy/Bakugan/Kingdom Hearts/Dinosaurs/The Shining/The Simpsons/Annoying Orange/Foster's Home for Imaginary Friends/Super Mario Bros./Spooky's House of Jumpscares/Left 4 Dead/Kool-Aid crossover I've ever seen.
>retroactively patching up the deus ex machina from part 1, providing a conclusion to the quest for patrick in a surprising and interesting way and setting up a chance for a part 3 if you want to save Alice, without outright giving us a cliffhanger
It’s kino
Looks like Alice is in chains.
You're on Yea Forums so you better have LMAC in your collection.
This is basically the ending to Conker's Bad Fur Day
where's the 76th page?
Page 76, the last page.
What happens next?
He's making a 3rd comic. Which will complete the trilogy, and you bet I'll storytime it when it's out.
But that might not be for a while, there was a 2 year gap between the first one and the second. But you never know.
I'll definitely storytime the first (and parts of the second) again on Halloween.
Thank you to everyone for sticking along, this was a fucking blast to do. I'm glad you had a good time.
See you guys again on Halloween,
-OP
This was fantastic.
Thank you OP
fucking amazing
first one was gold.
second delved too much into the dinosaurs, but was still great.
LMAC?
My favorites are Night of the Were Ed, My Immortal, World of Light, Bring me to Ed and Tails gets trolled. I also like autism animation like Neko Sugar Girls, Tokyo Crystal Mew, and Mike and Melissa.
Woo, thanks OP. Was fun. Time to go to bed and then buy Japanese language textbooks
Good job,OP was most certainly not a faggot.
A
FUCKING
KEYBLADE
>same ending
Kino
See you on Halloween! Maybe you can dump after the yearly Bring Me to Ed storytime!
The what now
Let's Make a Comic, where the OP draws the entire threads. He started in January and made 11 issues and an annual so far.
Thanks, OP.
youtu.be
Bring me to Ed AND night of the were-ed.
You’ll see. Don’t spoil yourself if you’ve never read those masterpieces. Been a tradition for a few years now.
I’ll be sure to check it out! Thanks!
Alright, I'm out for the night.
Thanks again, everyone.
We got ourselves a new Halloween tradition!
This guy is a genuinely good storyteller, managing to tie the story up so nicely like said. It also made me genuinely laugh, goddamn, im honestly impressed
The triple bill with Were-Ed and Bring me to Ed will be fun. It’ll be a good decompresser after the drama heavy aspects of those
I always wanted to do my own one of these. Maybe i’ll just buckle down and go for it.
Thanks for the storytime OP. Just way too much good stuff. I'm genuinely happy I read through it all.
Reminder to hail to the king
You first
holy moly
improved version
SOUL
SOULLESS
This comic was a damn goldmine.
>m-m-m-m-monster kill
based
this is comedy gold
>blocks your path
whats this?
Holy shit this is great
Their candle cove adaptation was fucking awful though and missed every point the original had
You realize he's pasted over images from The Shining, right?
I like how the author is clearly autistic and has Sonic explain the joke
Is that a fucking Evil Dead 2 reference?!
Well, they say the first sentence should grab the reader's attention...
I remember reading one like this but with Tucker from Danny Phantom and Sharon from Braceface and it had even worse looking art. anyone feel like reading it? It's from bigpurplemuppet99 on DA
Be honest, this was the kind of shit you imagined when you were a kid.
Or still imagine, if your an autist like me. Duck Dodgers can totally survive the 40k universe, btw.
I am awake, and man I'm glad I came back
What a ride.But the journey is over.
youtube.com
now where have i seen this before
this is fucking comedy heaven material
>YELLOW!
the fuck you mean b
are they fucking dead
Good storytelling + genuine autism is such a unique form of entertainment
THE PLOT THICKENS
But isn't that how it was in the original story?
yooooo
what the fuck is a pirq
i gotta be honest with you i like the twist ending
it's so ugly some of the images of the pasta series are broken
Just to be clear, you have read No End Hose 1, 2, AND 3 right? The story isn't really changing.
IS THIS A MOTHERFUCKING NES GODZILLA REFERENCE
That was insane, what the hell? Also too much dinosaurs.
I'm already dead at the first sentence
he looks like a fucking leaf.
>DDDDOOOOOOOOOHHHHHH
>Skull Grinder
The crossovers in this are fucking kino
I want more, so much more.
OP here, shocked this thread is still up, I'm not mad, the power of autism is too strong.
Yes, the author confirmed that in the comments.
So expect Red to show up in the third one
Wait, how recent was the second comic made?
autism: the thread
Last year
oh my god
Wait till you learn about the Dong Squad
This. The Dongers are true meme kino, and the author is pretty based
Top 10 Anime Battles:
youtu.be
>Missplells neither the first two times
>Spells it correctly the third time.
This shouldn't bug me, but it does.
It's called Shag and Scoob
I don't think we're getting Part 3 this year. The author is focusing on getting the reading of Part 2 out this year instead. He would have posted it last year, but he had trouble getting a female voice actor.
If there are any female voice actors in the thread, this is your chance
oh this is a good reaction image
I can't tell if this thread is heaven or hell
I can fucking hear the scene, I can't stop laughing
Both.
Does the author offer a physical omnibus of these legendary comics? I'd throw down $10
It would be one thing if he illustrated all of it, but every image is from a copyrighted source, he could potentially get sued up the ass.
Ah yes, the girl being Satan cliche. How could I forget?
Fuck “Shut up demon!” Got a genuine laugh out of me.
I think I’m already drunk.
>Sora’s Smash Reveal trailer.
thanks OP, good stuff
Is the artist of this autistic, or was the story this is from autistic?
Here's the magnificent autist's Deviantart
deviantart.com
Both probably, and its fucking glorious
I'd love to see another artist redraw the whole comic with the same plotline and mispelled words
You should've been there for the lets make a comic threads
>redraw this whole comic with the same plotline and typos
sounds like a challenge I am ready to take
How did creepypasta become kids' and autists' favorite past-time?
Remember, no matter what you think, if you're going to commit to something, fucking commit. This is Yea Forums we have standards here now.
is that a commitment? gunna need a blood oath to seal that deal, user
He also made a christmas special
deviantart.com
college might get in the way of production in the future, but I might as well make the deal.
You better deliver, I'm counting on you
Oh shit, I'm definitely storytiming this one on Christmas.
Pic related is the guy's waifus
forgot to send this
just weasel your way into making it a project for one or more of your classes. if you're taking art classes, i'm sure some of your peers will be more than happy to help you
Don't fucking fail us user
Fuck it, are you guys up for one more storytime?
might need a new thread, but sure
don't get your expectations too high, guys. It's gonna be a while to finish.
I'm up for infinite storytimes.
>1) Befriend some animator fags in your art department at your college
>2) Convince them to help you animate this autism for the lels and to showcase their skills
>3) Get good grades on your projects from collaborative demonstration
>4) Return to Yea Forums to post your finished creation and gloat
just a few easy steps to success, user. i have faith in you
Someone make a MEGA link for this shit.
I can already tell you're not going to do it
NEW STORYTIME
YOUTUBE POOP MERMAIDMAN AND BARNACLE BOY MOVIE COLAB!
GET IN HERE
>not NoEd House
I mean its right fucking there!
>sounds like a challenge I am ready to take
Now this is something that has my attention.
10:30 PM EST
The Cartoon Christmas Carol Storytime
Christmas in July bois. Be ready
>bionicles
At first you had my curiosity, now you have my erection.
>Christmas in July bois
but it....
Oh it really is July.
Link your DA so I can see it when you post it.
>Few that was close
Heh
May that user get heavy rug burns
Oh god oh fuck
I feel like I need to press charges against this comic's creator for something.
>Kingdom Eds
All autist like dinos. It's a stereotype that fits.
But they're ALL time travel rooms!
>Ow that's got to hurt forever
"Neptune what the hell are you doing in my house and how did you get in here" is not a sentence I expected to read tonight
Haha. Fuck you.
I thought spongebob turned into a hamburger
NoEnd House has a sequel where exactly this happens so unlikely.
The fiend! I bet it was all a scheme to snatch their wallets and buy more heroin
you forgot Pokemon, my dude.
Why would Patrick tell him about the house if he doesn’t want him to go there?
That is one of the greatest opening lines I have ever read in a work of fiction
This page is pure art.
I think that’s his stegosaurus
MERRY FUCKING SUMMERMAS EVERYBODY!
He's talking about the placement of the characters
>she still thinks it's all a prank
>after all that she still thinks it's a prank
Whys sonic flipping us off
You poor summer child.
CARTOON CHRISTMAS CAROL STORYTIME THREAD IS UP
GET IN HERE
Please update when is done
Before I truly sell my soul and fully commit to this, here's the first page.
Lookin' real good there man.
Now we're cookin' with fire!
Fuck off you already committed. I expect a full comic from you soon or you're fired buster.
what a legend
You're soul is now Yea Forums property.
Expect it to be converted into a flavor or the month sometime in the next year.
Now make a DA account or something so we have a reliable place to have this archived.
>You're soul is now Yea Forums property
Well shit, that's what I wanted to hear
>Now make a DA
DA might not be a good place to post. the autist who originally made this will probably try to "sue" my ass.
>It begins
Let him.
I'll be there watching the drama.
He's autistic, he can't sue you. His mom on the other hand...
I don't think anyone here has bothered to ask, but what is this lad's DA?
Nevermind I found him, all this talk about this is probably turning me retarded {/spoiler]
anyway, here's the DA
deviantart.com
Holy shit you're actually doing it?
God speed you mad lad!
Is this a Christmas Carol?
Epic fucking battle...
Eddy uses king haki
I refuse to believe this comic isn't deliberately autistic.
Speaking of autism, for almost 10 years I've been working a Fanfic about the Mario Universe along the same lines as Super Mario Z. Do I finally commit to it and start writing down for people to read and either enjoy to laugh at my autism, or enjoy my attempt at writing a serious plot and world building?
Art
I encourage anybody to write their own crazy ideas. Writing it out is extremely cathartic and you never know how your idea can effect people, even if it’s silly.
>not fixing spelling mistakes
Only half based