that last thread got me thinking..... post other examples of webcomics that are improved with less panels or less text
That last thread got me thinking..... post other examples of webcomics that are improved with less panels or less text
Carson Gutierrez
David King
I could've sworn that last thread told you this comic doesn't work with less text
Levi Bailey
you keep taking the wrong lessons from these threads
it should be Bladies for Ladies
John Diaz
How about "knives for wives" or "cutlasses for lasses"?
Brandon Gray
I'm not claiming that this is perfect. It's just a fun exercise to cut out as much as possible without trying to lose key points.
I'd venture that we don't need the lord sword at all. People are typically aware of the "pink" female marketing.
These are fun, though.
Michael Ward
This works better than OP. The implication that blue swords are for men isn't really necessary because all swords are implied to be for men unless otherwise specified.
Nolan Brown
Colton Ward
Or Pikes for Dykes
Luis Gomez
Kinda changes the tone of the dude-knight.
Before, he seemed benign. Now he seems offended at her question.
Brandon Edwards
Gavin Ward
Jason Torres
pls no, Yea Forums did this and all it proved was most of their posters were autistic
Cameron Scott
Andrew Davis
Have it just be like
“...”
And maybe chop down her question like
“Why would anybo-“
Also bladies for ladies
Gabriel Lee
WORDS BAD
Cameron Gonzalez
Made It better
Hunter Price
Peak version of this comic:
>No Swords for Lords panel
>Bladies for Ladies panel
>Why would anyone need a pink sword?
>Pink Knight with no text
Jose Martinez
Dominic Ward
a crummy bladie? He should be holding a pail of water!
Ryder Jones
D&D NERDS?
Carter Cooper
Is that supposed to be the fixed version? How terrible was the original?
Tyler Long
A serious attempt
Mason Cook
A valiant effort but lack of brevity isn't really the issue so much as there isn't really much of a joke to save to begin with.
Leo Sanders
>WHERES THE JOKE?
It's clearly meant to be more like part of a visual novel with an amusing beat, not a punchline
Jaxson Williams
Y'all think the knight is a fairy but I know it is really a cute muscle knight girl embracing her more feminine qualities.
Alexander Ward
I disagree. I think OP's version works better on a subtler level.
If you guys think it's TOO subtle, then maybe the knight should be redrawn tentatively reaching out for the pink sword. That might make it clearer.
Still, I think less text is better, and I think the keeping the first panel adds something too.