Cartoon pitch thread

Alrighty Yea Forums it’s that time again to pitch your EPIC cartoon series.

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A kid possesed by an eldritch entity has to uncover the mistery behind the death of his parents and his new powers, while maintaining his school life and fighting supernatural assassins from a death-cult led by a crusader turned necromancer.
I would like it if the ost sounded like something out of MGR:R mixed with Bloodborne.

Can we fit in a big tv personality name? Perhaps someone from Mad TV to voice the demon?

Teen* not kid, sorry.

A happy go-lucky 1930s blackface minstrel cartoon character (similar to Bosko) is accidentally summoned to earth by an otherkin who thinks xir power is the ability to channel cartoon characters, well, xe is right, but xe can only channel characters from the 30s-40s who are now dated. The series revolves around the conflict between the Toon (who is horrified by modern, cynical sitcom cartoons and by ''gangsta'' culture) and the otherkin, who is constantly in fear of being overtaken by the Toon's consciousness and doing something racist in front of xir woke ''friends''.

Santa Claus was real but died centuries ago and now everyone thinks he was just made up for kids, the series is about his second coming with him trying to convince people that he's real and not just a crazy person

You gonna love this one.

My idea cartoon pitch show is this,but it's adult only:

You know shows like Star vs. the Forces of Evil and Miraculous: Tales of Ladybug & Cat Noir,well what if both of them fused together into one show and it will be Ladybug & Cat Noir vs. the Forces of Evil.

But the show have these main characters:

Marco Diaz (protagonist)
Angie Diaz (protagonist/love interest)
Janna Ordonia (comic relief/best friend)
Jackie Lynn Thomas (Marco's girlfriend and a supporter)

But the show's characters doesn't have are :

StarButterfly (Never Exist)
Marco's Dad(Died)
Marco's male friends (never exist)


The plot of this show is that Marco and Angie have super powers and became a superheroes,but one of them never knew their identity,they keep it secret at all cost.It have the plot of SVTFOE and Miraculous Ladybug.

Angie have the powers of lady bug but it came from different dimension

Marco have powers of cat noir but it also came from different dimension.

Its a Romance/Comedy/Action/Drama shows.Marco had a crushed on Angie,but Angie had a crush on Marco(superhero version) it's kinda have Miraculous Ladybug love triangle formula.

Just remember the whole episode of SVTFOE and Miraculous Ladybug you watched and reimagine the whole thing but in different scenario and situation of the show, Ladybug & Cat Noir vs. the Forces of Evil.

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A Netflix adaptation of Battletech universe.

OR

An shameless Isekai cartoon with everything you love and hate about anime

A parody of badly done satire of modern life. Shows called "What If Cell Phone...But Too Much?"

That’s sounds kinda gay. I know it’s pride month but, please keep it to yourself.

I have seen probably hundreds of these Idea threads and read thousands of ideas and this has to be the single most embarrassing one i have ever seen in my life.

Congrats on you're Golden Autism award.

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>netflix
could be disappointing or completely mediocre. would still watch.

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Kinky. Good job

An anthology about a rural town with dark secrets. Maybe your next door neighbor is a vampire, old ladies complain about creepy ladies scratching on the rv, or sex demons who get summoned just because someone was lonely. Only thing that all these shorts share is the overarching themes of expectations.

A strong headed female warrior settles down with a gentle lumberjack and becomes the perfect soft housewife raising their kids.

Shadowrun.
It's fucking shadowrun.

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Hey guys, OP here and I want to show you guys my idea.
My show is has a combination of an apocalyptic Cyberpunk setting combined with Halloween shit. Humans are extinct and now monsters and serial killers are the leading species, governments are now replace with big tech corporations as they call the shots. The main villain Cyborgula owns the largest corporation of them all
“Trigger treat” which is basically evil Amazon. However to test there new products Cyborgula funded a tournament to see if any monster wants to stepped to the crypt.

The whole show is based on three things
1. Classic Horror and monster archetypes
2. Shonen battle anime
3. Classic 90s arcade fighters like Darkstalkers, Mortal Kombat etc

That’s all I got what you guys think?

It sounds pretty cool, I’m a fan of Darkstalkers and Killer Instinct

A show about a group of subpar villains coming together to try and sabotage the big-league villain group in order to be the "rightful" opponents of the city's superhero league. Some concept characters:
>Animaul - A shapeshifter formally with the "big-league" villains who sustained minor brain damage during one of their fights with the heroes. He was kicked off the team due to his condition, now permanently stuck in a monstrous abomination of combined animal features (dragonfly wings, crab claws, bear head, snake tail)
>Mastermime - The sole survivor of the Mime race, gifted with the ability to pantomime objects into existence.
>Slick - An oil field worker turned ecoterrorist following an accident that left him as a sentient living oil humanoid.
>Superior - Prince of the Great Lakes. A spin on the typical Atlantean ocean king, he's a freshwater lakedweller and heir to the underwater kingdom within the Great Lakes. His family gets ousted from power in a pro-democracy coup, so he's trying to toughen up before returning to reinstate the authoritarian monarchy.

The Whiteys: a cartoon about a family of plantation owners in the antebellum South. Similar to the Flintstones and Jetsons, but instead of animals or robots, they use slaves for EVERYTHING.

A fancy gent regales his twin nephews with colorful stories of his youth (and other equally stimulating topics), each one weirder and more unbelievable than the last. Two 11-minute tall tales per episode, guaranteed.

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one day whilst disero, an overly nice but misguidingly racist human astronaut stationed in space gets transported through a worm hole to a time pocket dimension with a god like live action ceelo green head
(no im not joking its literally just ceelo greens green screened head with glow affects)
he gravely offends ceelo by saying something unintentionally racist
ceelo gets pissed and sends to another world t made entirely of candy, with candy based anthropomorphic animals populating this world (there is also a fennec fox ice cream queen but she does not come in till later)

his attempt at first contact is miserably terrible
and it involves playing a song that in our world is in very poor taste, but in there world might as well be an act of war, the rest is pretty much him trying to survive as a candyland outlaw none as the non-ed, the only non edible being.

its pic related except toned down alot for teens/ adults
I just dont have/know of any songs that are shitposty enough to play during the first contact scene, everything else is a work in progress, but dont fret I am determined to see it to fruition.
but whilst Im here does anyone have any shitposty songs that could be taken as an act of war?

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Freakazoid sequel except with the modern internet and he has depression. All the characters from the original show stop by to try and cheer him up. Eventually CandleJack shows up an

An aimless young man is tasked with finding eleven wizards who have mysteriously disappeared on a dangerous magical mountain. If he doesn't find them soon the world will end.

Urban youth finds out that he's a demigod, upon learning this he decides to use his newfound powers to try and find his estranged father and KICK HIS ASS
Along the way he meets up with a Monk from the east that has dedicated his life to finding the Godess of Victory and Marrying her and they join forces.

Also, Superior ends up falling for one of the heroes when he's secretly detained following one of the skirmishes between the two villain groups. That little arc follows his long entrenched belief about his race's superiority to humans versus his personal feelings for the very human hero. Not sure how I want that thread to end.

also he is in constant fear of being eaten, as meat has never existed in their world and after one of the denisens bites him in self defense, she gets a taste of his blood, loves it, and quickly spreads the message to everyone that hes delicious, so I dont know, might play around with the whole eater is the eaten dynamic
which would be made funnier if before he was transported to this world, he had a strange addiction to candy
hhhhhhmmmmmm, ideas, ideas,

A quadruple amputee teen girl with super hi tech prosthetics and her mutant best friend have wacky adventures in a colorful post apocalyptic wasteland.

Pixar Presents Turds, it's about a bunch of turds trying to make it in the big city even when everyone treats them like shit, it would have lots of important and current messages like the mayor not wanting turds at his big gala and them holding a protest

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Hero is a man possesed by a demon.
Villain is a girl who exercises demons with magic.

You forgot the part where the turds learn that the important thing is to Be Yourself!

That's sure to be a new and refreshing moral in a kid's movie.

An adult-animated series about a depressed man who ends up crashing his car into a lake. The man is contacted by the Devil and is revived as the Devil's personal Contractor. The main character's job is to look for desperate people around the world and give them what they need in exchange for their soul via a contract.

A brutal war is set in a realm of demons and one demon must lead his small personal military to defeat all odds, the art being super detailed and the story would be gritty and mature.

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Son of a long line of demon hunters and a demoness of envy fall in love. Shennanigans ensue as they deal with various demons and hunters who try to stop their relationship, as both sides see it as heretical as fuck.

you guys are so obsessed with shit.

On a treadmill?

>ctrl+f "demon"
>10 results
>5 different posts mentioning variations on ideas with demons

problem?

be creative

>"Gentlemen, you can't post about shit in here, this is the Yea Forums board!"

shoot yourself

I can never tell if these threads are sarcastic ideas, genuine ideas, or both.

why?

same

shut up

now that's just hurtful.

I hope pitches for autistic comic WIPs are okay
In a world where snakes are feared and hated for their ability to shapeshift, it's discovered that the royal family of the ruling empire are secretly snakes in disguise. With the whole empire out for his blood, the crown Prince flees the palace, only to find himself in a faraway country with no clue how to live as a snake. After teaming up with a poor farmgirl who blackmails him after learning his secrets, the two set off towards the capital, determined to lie, cheat, and sneak their way back to the throne.

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I just saw this picture in /tg/.

New cartoon idea. This girl is the main character.

Wacky magical suburban slice of life.

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Magic the gathering

wait like an actual snake or snakepeople or like nagas??

>Girl
There's already comics about her, and they're all about vore and transformation fetish stuff

They're literal snakes

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wow!
I want to boop the royal snoot!

Based and Candlejackpille

Well animation quality for mech anime has improved and we can get away with guns being used again

I want my glorious gauss rifle firing and shredding a mech apart.

>Modeseven/Nitrotitan/Amidixie

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yeah I kinda assumed all of that was true but it's no reason not to immediately open palm slam a post into the "shouting ideas into the void" thread when I see a pic that makes horny.
Or maybe there is. Maybe i should of done a background check here.

A kid that was SUPPOSED to die decided to cheat death, but still has to go to school each day. The show follows three boys from the class trying to avoid the fucking Grim Reaper from killing them because said kid is supposedly one of them. But they don't know which.
Also a random student gets killed by mistake each episode i guess.

A short 5 minute series called the Germies. Its gonna be about a group of bacteria/germs who live in the city of Microbia. Every episode will be about exploring a specific type of bacteria or micro organism and how harmful they are to humans all in a 5 minute episode.

The intro will be something like "They're dirty, they're deadly, they are the Germies~" or something like that.

STARRING...

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I would love that except for
>how harmful they are to humans
There's so much more to bacteria beyond how how they cause disease in humans. Vibrio fischerri comes to mind as an easy cool one, since it causes bioluminesence in squids. Bacteria and viruses have all sorts of interactions that don't involve humans at all, and some are even beneficial to us. An education toon about stuff like how bacteria can be used to make GMO crops or insulin would be really neat, or even how bacteria interact with plants with the hypersensitive response, and fixing nitrogen for legumes would be really neat. Microbes are so poorly represented, and that makes me sad.

A cyberpunk tale of strange addictions, reconciliation, the trans-formative power of friendship, and lots of over-the-top violence.
Set in the nearish future, it focuses on the two protagonists, both young women, similarly afflicted by cybernetic mishap and the hands they've been dealt.
Beatrice is a happy-go-lucky sort on the surface. A waitress at a seedy bar that more than a few mafia goons decide to frequent. She doesn't get the best tips, being five nothing but strangely beefy, pretty but not all that great with social interaction. In truth, she's a rogue, cybernetically augmented killing machine, kidnapped as a wee one and subjected to the bleeding edge of the science, resulting in amazing reflexes, an overclocked state where she's beyond human limits(with side effects, including her reduced height), and dense muscles/bones that can deliver a lethal beatdown, with a heap of training to make all that into a knife that could be stuck anywhere in America's enemies(she's also not the only one.) Additionally, has bunny ears on top of her head, because the director of the project's... "tastes." This all is further complicated by Bea's strange vice and her conscience struggling with it: the art of violence, IE the method, look, and feel of doing it, but disgusted with the results, reality, and harm it does.
The other is a "girl" named Paddy, short for Padmavati. She, on the other hand, had a happy home life. No real ambitions, beyond marrying a good man, and having children. Her parents fucked it up by installing a medical suite in her at the age of twelve. The implant, later recalled due to its faulty programming, saw any major metabolic change as something to correct, and stunted her growth somewhere around the start of puberty. The damage done, Paddy became a resentful, angry little thing; channeled it well enough for a masters in chemical engineering, but now lashes out and hypercompensates for her "childish" appearance by being a bitter, pint-sized sin machine.

Genndy Tartanovsky makes an anthology series about various events, figures, and places throughout history.

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I actually argued with myself about whether to make it full on scientific exploration about microbes to get kids into biology like you mentioned or just a PSA about health safety. I went with the latter because I was afraid of how much microbe information I could put into 5 minute episodes and probably because I was thinking about those 2000s Nickelodeon shorts about gross habits and Safety Girl.

is Angie still his mom or what?

Gentlemen. We need to fund an adaptation of

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user that was fucking great

this is where ideas go to get stolen

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Sounds more like a single episode of Drawn Together than it's own full series but I'll grant you that's some funny shit you've got there

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posts like these are why i still come here. god speed

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Yes but is like this,Marco had a crushed on his mother and Angie Diaz had a crushed on Marco superhero ego version of him,it's have the love triangle formula of the show Miraculous Ladybug,do you understand on what i'm saying.

which one do you wanna hear about?

>Kid Scholar works with a bunch of female pirates in a fantasy 1700's setting involving lots of world building, humanist and combined romantic-enlightenment messages, and fast thinking cons over brutish foes

>Fraternal twin siblings in a space opera setting inherit their dad's black-box freighter and work to finish his last jobs and solve the mystery of his disappearance as well as struggle to bury the hatchet that estranged them from one another?

>Post apocalyptic show in which the protagonists struggle to survive both the hazards of a broken world and one another's own flaws while contemplating the merits and virtues of society as it was and as it could be versus accepting humanity's extinction.

>One of several possible super hero cartoons set in an alternate 1960's setting I made. (the strongest contender of what might make the best cartoon series would follow the Hawaiian Super Group The Birds of Paradise.)

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Ok I don´t think these anons got this when they read this

This is like back to the future with superheroes but Marty has to keep living with his mom and he actually wants to fuck her.

What if there was a movie entirely made about a turd on a stick? But also he's a turd in love, and he's in love with this girl, but the dad doesn't want them to be together, he's like "I DON'T TALK TO SHIT!" and tries to set her up with some pansy-ass guy who teaches piano.

It's like a frosty the snowman scenario

Imagine a world filled with anthropomorphic characters who's favourite sport is futuristic racing. We follow adventures of a young rookie racer who discovers conspiracy behind his beloved sport.

>furries
so it's M rated right? they fuck right?

Anyone can steal your idea, but no one can take your execution

No. It's for kids so animal characteristics are more appealing to them.

Action/Comedy about a middle-aged businesswoman who, whilst the world is in the midst of an invasion by giant monsters, gains the ability to transform into a kaiju herself. Focuses on her trying to balance time between work, taking care of her kids as a single mother, and her lovelife, taking out her pent-up frustration on whatever monster is unlucky enough to be terrorizing the city this week

All your ideas are terrible.
They re so legitimately terrible, you all should feel bad about having such shitty ideas

Cyberpunk. Socially awkward loser does off jobs in a city gone mad with technology and transhumanism.

My twist on it would be that the main character is actually a socially awkward loser with no friends who autistically struggles to communicate with the girl he likes and slowly becomes more and more insane as the city burns.

I need new writing practices and techniques in order to make my shows a reality. Writing practices which not even the 30s, 90s, 2000s excelled at. I'd basically need a video game designer and a romance writer to do this.
I can't explain my idea properly. My idea is based off execution not story.

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Spartan and medieval knight with regular swords and spears fighting gangsters and gods in the future. No real plot, just brutality.

Pretty cool.

1 or 2 please.

Elf boy finds accidentaly atempt to summon ancient evil and get transported into the cyberpunk world. He hides with a girl and they perform whole ET shtic. At the end of season 1 he manages to open a portal tp his home but it was taken over so both girl and boy work on improving both worlds.

A bunch of cute fluffy animals live in an apocalyptic jungle lava ice ocean shadow planet. Their side is a magical utopia with either magical castles, floating islands, cloud cities or mundane relaxing meadows, country towns, forests, mountains.
These fluffy animals have a wide vocabulary and elegance with an energetic, affectionate personality. They are specist as hell.
They constantly battle Magic The Gathering, Duel Masters, Warhammer 40k monsters and environments.

There's 3 "separate" shows, one involving an on-going story to protect a source of energy from the bad guys. Another show about adventure exploration and another show about slice of life and background characters given episodes.

I believe separating the episodes in at least 2 categories will be better for everyone, so we don't get Wakfu season 1.

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Nicktoons Unite in the style of Avengers: Earth's Mightiest Heroes and DCAU Justice League Unlimited.

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You sound more and more autistic with each post

Time to stop

Fantasy races exist and takes place in modern day.
We have Orcs, Elves, Dwarves, Humans,Lizard people, Cat people, Elephant people, Dragons and Giants.
The story is about a 4man squad of Police officers trying to keep their city safe.
Because of the worlds history the space race never happened as a result no space travel yet

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But what about the two elf brothers?

Dreamworks presents: Poos.

it's the story of funny poos trying to make it big, we got all your favorite current comedy people voicing them.

With all new hit pop songs.

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Don't you mean poop songs?

My cartoon is just ripping off anime I grew up watching.

Plot? idunno, some dude has basically a harem, lots of love drama or whatever, I'm just here to rip off anime and get praise from normies.

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Ultrapowerfull shapeshifting Demi god Boomer hobo accidentally gives a fraction of his powers to a random teen. Now the teen must learn to controle his new and ever growing powers while fighting the shapeshifting Boomers old enemies and new ones

Where have i heard this before?

>evil amazon
amazon is already evil

I can only describe my ideas through music:
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Human kid from 2000 is abducted by aliens and sold as a slave to the highest bidder. He is extremely expensive because humans are so weird to the Aliens. Not liking this He attempts to break free. Only to realise that he isnt even in the same galaxy anymore before he is captured again.
He Meets his new 'master' A sleazy fly humanoid. He makes a deal with the new slave. If he can raise enough credits working for the fly he can buy back his freedom. With no other option he now embarks on a life of servitude untill he can buy back his freedom.
Basic structure is the kid is sent to an Alien planet and given a random mission. Sometimes steal somthing,sometimes Kill somthing or somthing else

Can we specify his powers, since I feel like they're a big deal. How about he has respawn powers, but every time he does he leaves behind a corpse so he's constantly hiding his own bodies in lockers, bushes, and constantly has to dig his own grave?

I unironically love this. Instead of having Santa 2 though, can we maybe make Santa a time traveller instead? It's like the character motivation of Samurai Jack, except instead of saving the world from Aku, he's gotta go back to save Christmas.

You have a setting, but you need the plot and your hook.

Ensemble squads are all about interesting character interactions. Someone who is brain damaged and someone who is silent by trade do not sound like good primaries to have interesting interactions with. You'll quickly run out of things to do with the both of them and leave Slick and Superior carrying. If S&S are not strong enough characters, this will cave in.

Give me that tasty character motivation, boy. Why would the Devil revive this particular guy as his contractor. Devil seems like a dude who would pick someone with a strong will, not someone who'd just sudoku.

Solid take on our government being reptilians. I'd go ask /x/ for advice on deepest lore.

In pitching characters are the bait. They're wonderfully complex, but if you have no hook you'll never catch a fish. Try and capture your entire idea in 20 words or less.

Is the hobo subject to the same punishing reality that we are, or does he choose to be a hobo? To be honest, this could be very poignant if there weren't even villains but just a complete lack of foresight about the use of his powers, and all of his heroic deeds have effectively made the modern world more dangerous and terrible.

>the hobo subject to the same punishing reality that we are, or does he choose to be a hobo?
A bit of both. He was a big hero during the golden age but for all his powers he hasn't really made any change.This compounded with the fact that he has literally been everything in the universe he has no drive to do anything and just becomes a helpfull 80's and 90's taking hobo.
He hopes that the kid would learn from his mistakes and try and be the change the kid wants to see in the world
His villians are mostly golden age and silver age villians who dont realise how powerfull they are.

>No plot, no motivation, no hook, 20 words or less
Executive please, you either learn to fill in the shells or you shut up. Never ask somebody else to fill the idea for you. Even the most basic idea like that Santa Clause one is going to be wasted on people like you who can't carry the most simplest, basic, 101 idea if your life depended on it, and your life does depend on it.

A rifined swashbuckling pirate wizard takes a feral village girl as an apprentice in the magic and mystical arts. They get into wacky hijinks as he tries to teach her basic and complex spells.

if its about humans its creatively bankrupt already

oh hey, ive been curious about the story these characters take place in ever since i saw you post em a while back! i honestly love this premise, solid setup and feels like theres lots of good relationship dynamic potential between the two leads

Sorry Otherkin but tumblr is the other way

What if we added knife ears? and maybe a top hat?

Okay okay, I feel you. Yeah if you could really colour his history using a lot of the difficult moral decisions he's made over time to really make him a more nuanced character.

In something like this I'd probably be looking for greater thematic overlays. You mind laying out a villain for me?

Kiddo, why don't you have a seat? I didn't say any of these ideas were bad, I just suggested there's a process. In fact I specifically commented on the ones I did because I liked them, and I wanted to see more. There are plenty I chose to leave no comment to. Capturing that core idea is fundamentally important to pitching anything idea in life.

I think you're broadly underestimating how much work goes into putting together a full show pitch. If I hired you to make a show pitch, and you gave me half of a pitch and then told me it was my job to do the rest, any sane person would fire you immediately.

I'm sorry that the world is difficult, and demanding. I'm sorry if you're going through some stuff and you just want people on the internet to respect your ideas. I'm sure they're wonderful in your head. But your job as a creative is to take that wonderful idea and put it into my head. There are processes, and methods on which all of this can be evaluated.

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Dude fuck off, you're too immature and talentless to review ideas step by step.

>A rifined swashbuckling pirate wizard
Cool
>feral village girl
That's an oxymoron, if she's feral she's not a village girl.
> takes a feral village girl as an apprentice
Why?
>They get into wacky hijinks
Saying this is like saying nothing at all.

Your bait is creatively bankrupt.

Local Hobo saves his town from horffic fish mutants

One villian idea i have is the hobo's old rival. He is also ultra powerfull but instead of changing his shape he can forcefully change the shape if others.
Now this guy is a nut. he wants to beat his rival in everything. This means giving his powers to a random teen aswell but also giving them to a messed up kid who would have turned into a school shooter
The basic theme i have for this show is that is that people have to make the changes they want. Most of the villans use their powers to make other people change but never decided to change themselves.

something to spite Andrew Dobson who thinks he can create his own magical girl show currently:

The year is 2030. Five years ago a group of powerful demons originating from ancient greece defeated/destroyed a group of five magical girls who held the only power capable of getting rid of them permanently. Since then Earth has become an Samurai Jack like dystopia with humans being either forcefully turned into demon vessels (turning them into monster of the week like beings) or trying their best to coexist with the demon overlords, who have also enslaved a lot of other magical creatures.
Melanie, a 15 year old girl whose sister belonged to the group once fighting the demons, lives in the underground, a refugee and member of a resistance. When the resistance attempts to assassinate one major demon lord at a museum opening dedicated to the defeat of the heroes from five years ago, Melanie accidentally triggers one of the artifacts at disposal and becomes a "succesor" to her sister. She now has to save the world by empowering the virtue of hope. Which becomes kind of complicated when it turns out her own slightly cynical nature makes it hard for her to really tap into her powers.

He takes the Village girl because she has great potential. The basic adventure is to find well of all knowledge and the many highjinx that come along the way

so Reptiloids the animated show?
I kinda like the idea.

Nice man. I mean I maybe would sidestep school shooting personally, but that's a cool villain gimmick. You could probably subvert most powers in a similar fashion, and slowly build up a cast that spans generations of hero and villain work. And nice, great to hear that you've already got some ideas for overarching themes, those get discounted really quickly but are super important.

What are the conditions for the Pirate to start losing their shit and reconsider this training? Is the ship well protected? How powerful is this feral? What ultimately keeps these two together?

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Animal team entirely out of reptiles
>Muscular Mutant Gatorman from Miami
>Out of time pre-historic dinoman with a tribal caveman demeanor and feral tendencies
>Alien Horned Lizard Teen that's interested in learning about earth culture after crash landing
>Mystical Skink Lizardwoman from a magic society that has hidden in plain sight for years among humans
Together they fight villains across time and space.

>You'll quickly run out of things to do with the both of them and leave Slick and Superior carrying.
Oh yeah, those aren't the entire team. I'm still trying to spitball ideas for the other characters, but I'm thinking there would probably be a total of seven-ish villains. And when I say he's got minor brain damage, it's not a massive impediment to his communication, it's moreso memories, control over his power, etc.

sounds familiar

See the pirate come from well off family so he has some posh to him. The reason he is a strong wizard is because he was the aprentice to the strongest wizard of all(and over arching villian).The reason he became a pirate was to add some adventure to his life. He was surprisingly good at it. And slowly became known as a dashing swahbuckeler who stole treasure and women's heart. He had heard of a well of knowledge that granted the drinker the secrets of the universe so he is on a quest to find it. The reason he takes the girl is because she not only shows great potential she is also the daughter of one of his old flames.

How about a spin-off with Rick of Dimension J19 Zeta 7 and Jerry

Call it “Rick and Jerry”

Schoolshooter was an overexageration. He was that kid who so him self as a genius when he was average. He is a case of power corrupting the unfit individual

Does rotoscope and cgi count?

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Okay, but why does the girl follow him?

If rotoscope and cgi count I then I pitch my story for a MYST universe television series based on recent to pre-modern day D'ni. Antagonist is a n obsolete messiah, think Lieutenant Dan meets Spoon Boy from the Matrix. Main characters are a graduating class of world builders.

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She dont have any one else. Plus if she does follow him she gets to learn cool magic powerd

As is tradition,

>Superman cartoon, titled "The Man of Tomorrow"
>Highly futuristic sci-fi bent to it, maybe some Fleischer for flavor
>Metropolis is a super-city founded by Lex Luthor as the City of Tomorrow
>Crime is non-existent, medicine is so incredible that citizens live to their late 90s on average, everyone is superficially happy
>But Metropolis runs like a company town where instead of money you're paid in Metro credit, meaning you possess no capital outside of Metropolis; you're permanently under Luthor's thumb and he owns everything in the City, which he abuses under the table.
>Superman comes as a rural outsider from Kansas, a stranger to the city's ways, and haphazardly blows the lid on the intense corruption running through the city through his do-gooding
>Superman's supporting cast is familiar but tweaked:
>Lois is a frustrated reporter in a city with no news that gets a guilty thrill of Superman's arrival causing chaos and letting her break the story on Luthor's corruption
>Jimmy is a vain blogger type that records Superman for attention and slowly gets swept up into believing in his cause and using his social media as a platform for Supes' message
>Cartoon is episodic but has a running subplot of both Superman and Lex Luthor battling for public perception of the title of "Man of Tomorrow", Luthor trying to keep control of Metropolis while Superman tries to unshackle them from blissful dependence. Action comes from Superman battling Luthor's goons as well as brand new criminals and supervillains that pop up as side effects of Luthor's grip on the City slipping, which Luthor capitalizes on to paint Superman as a dangerous extremist bringing danger and crime to his perfect city.
>Greater themes of whether peace is worth being owned like property, if it's better to know the truth or live in blissful ignorance, and whether the future of humanity lies in safety or bold risks.

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We need someone to R8

No we don't. They have nothing constructive and objective to offer.

LOVE US!

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How bout a cartoon with Carnage as the main character and it would be chill and fun and TV MA. And instead of Carnage only killing, he could go on many different adventures/misadventures too and times where he has chillaxing at home episodes as well or he does small things.
Whilst having original enemies and comic book enemies featured in it, only he doesn't take it on the hero way he's solid 100% villain the whole way through.

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It's gotta have this as the theme song.
youtube.com/watch?v=zdVurLR8LhE

Yes

Holy moly I'd watch that. It needs best boy Sirrus though.

Boy takes a poop. Poop comes to life. They go on wacky adventures together.

Nah. One of the reasons I can't get this story into real life is because it's just VORE over and over again. Achenar ate Sirrus while falling through the warp void at the end of Revelation. He's really beat up about it though. I turned him into an Alas Poor Yorick reference. There thing about MYST (that the Ubisoft teams didn't understand) was that MYST needs to be made out of visual cliches. So I have a another bearded wild man. A lab coat wearing legacy wizarddress, a girl who looks like Merida from Brave, a Spider Monstress like Shelob and a blatant R2D2 meets clippy inspired floating hint-guide character. It's a lot cooler that any of that sounds but it's still just VORE after VORE.

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A superhero show set in a sort of idealised hybrid of the late 90s and early to mid 00s inspired by anime and silver age comic books. It's set in medium sized city on the Southern Californian coast called Churchside or "C-Side". Protagonist is Japanese-American teenager Jim Nagasaki. In a secret temple he finds while exploring an abandoned building he finds a magical Katana that turns him into superhero Ace Domino who has to protect "C-Side from a variety of super criminals and supernatural creatures.

It's set in a world that's both a moment before 9/11 and a moment before the financial crisis of 2008, a sort of idealistic, campy, pop art version of America. Something that invokes early DeviantArt, 90s Anime, Avril Lavigne and Linkin Park. There'd be an element of satire to it but I'd be mostly playing it straight. There's some individual ideas I have, like a Seapunk themed surfer gang, an incompetent bimbo supervillain who'd later become an equally incompetent superheroine, a war between angels and demons... that sort of thing.

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I like the idea that current reality would be seen as an apocalyptic future where the rest of America doesn't know that coast West America has heavier Japanese influence or that black people are a demographic.

who are they specist against? humanoids?
do they consider these humans/humanoid creatures on par with animals like pic related?
what are their abilities?
and what are their goals/culture like?
just some questions

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>It's not the end of the world, but you can see it from here.
That's the working title.
A lowrider beats a man half to death after he drunkenly smashes into his chopper and is told that he has to take the man's place as a courier or not only will his chopper be destroyed but so will his house, his cousins garage and everyone he knows.
The Lowrider doesn't mind. The economy has gone to shit, his father's MC is falling apart and his bike and truck are electric drainers. But what starts as a mind numbing slightly illegal job riding a bitch bike, escalates as things in the city take a turn for the despotic.

Netflix adaptation of Animorphs with each book being a 44minute episode. dont know about animation style tho. Kinda stylized since its set in the 90's but not in the ugly "this is an adults cartoon" kind of way
idk probably kinda like gargoyles or dragon prince. also there will be gore true to the books

Teenaged girl adrift in a now-defunct space base has to McGyver a spaceship together to get her best friend, the princess of an alien race of ant-like people, necessary medical treatment. She is pursued by a British ex-goth rocker who claims to know what happened to her POW parents and a the space equivalent of a KGB officer who also happens to be a wasp alien and leading a team consisting of a reptilian and a revived Archeopteryx.

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A happy animated sitcom with yellow farmers running a store and making fun of city slickers.

Thanks user, I'm glad you like the idea. Hopefully I'll be able to get the story going soon.

They're less reptilians and more like trickster monsters. I was trying to draw off the Serpent's Seed reading of the bible, which says that Satan fugged Eve in the form of a snake and fathered a race of snake people, combined with some naga and other Asian magic snake lore.

>Animated
>22 minutes
>Uses all elements of MK's lore
>It's starts out as a prequel to the mortal Kombat in MK9
>Raiden is a teen that's been chosen to be trained as Earth's realm protector for doing a miraculous deed
>Shao Khan is a poor orphan who was also picked for a miraculous deed.
>Both don't like each other because of bad attitudes for different realms
>Grandmaster training them, along with other students that will become relevant later in the series later on, set them up as partners
>Their daily task is cleaning, shopping, and going on quests to solve problems in all of the realms
>Friendship and soon rivalry grows between them
>Throughout the series, Shao Khan is constantly disrespected for being from Outworld(has a reputation of just being filled with pointless wars and impoverished all the time)
>Shao starts to show some ego and brutality to compensate this
>Raiden worries of the path his friend is taking
>It's time for the grand master to appoint new protectors
>Raiden is picked for Earthrealm and Shao isn't because he's becoming too cruel
>Anger ensues
>He's missing for a while before the ceremony of protectors
>The ceremony starts and Shao crashes
>He challenged his master in Mortal Kombat
>Losing, but his master doesn't want to kill his own students
>Shao Khan uses this and crush his head
>Raiden, angered, tries to attack him and fails
>Shao about to finish him off
>Raiden says that if his heart is truly hardened than he must do it
>Shao can't do it to his only friend who believed in him
>Teleport to Outworld to unify the realm and making it a conquering one (takes out Onaga).
>Raiden, as Earthrealm new protector, must find a disciple of his own to face the other realms in Mortal Kombat
>Season 1 ends

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okay, I'll start with number 2.

>The main duo are fraternal twin siblings Ushio and Samara (these are puns and more placeholder names).
>Samara is the technically older sister who is bossy, nononsense, and strict owing to a life long dream of becoming an admiral in the local confederacy's navy. She's got strong, short-term precognative gifts and telepathy along with some heavy cybernetic augmentations which all boil down to her love of fighting in melee in a space-age setting. However her dreams of multi-system admiralty were crushed by her younger brother's illegitimate connections which is part of what estranges them and leads her to a dead end career as an NCO of a merc band at the start of the story. in otherwords: she's a space samurai/ronin
>Ushio is a rough-riding pilot and crack shot with accelerated pistol. He's free-booting, reckless, and rough around the edges. In otherwords, a space cowboy. Growing up with his father absent for long stretches as part of his courier service, Ushio took it on himself to be a man around his house and did everything he could to support his sister's pricey dream of military career which he helped fund running jobs for various individuals which grew increasingly shady, but he was also increasingly desperate for money.
(ran out of space)

>Naturally each one blames the other for their lots in life and see eachother as opposites (and on the service, they are) but each one made choices without bothering to actually understand the details (Samara never considered her family's finances, Ushio didn't bother to look for just-as-well paying legitimate work) which is something that has left the two estranged until their father's mysterious disappearance
>All that's left is the seeming bog-standard light freighter that are found derelict in space and a statement in the will which request a series of unfinished jobs be completed.
>Each sibling wants the ship, and reluctantly are forced to share it, at least until they can finish their dad's final jobs and hope to find out what happened to him.
>First mystery is the ship itself which only seems to have the shell of a light freighter but is filled with black box technology rarely seen in any vessel much less one of the ship's size, and the amnesiac Ship AI/Robot who himself is a major clue in piecing together their father's history.
>The trio (core cast will grow in time, no more than five) will go on strange adventures across the galaxy, learning the truth about their father's disappearance, their own pasts, and learning to move forward from it as well in a world of psychics, aliens, giant mecha, intense dogfights in the void, and mysterious phenomenon like a ghostly woman who taps on the portholes from the outside of the ship.

In a way, this is kind of like Gravity Falls (with dipper and mabel's relationship shattered to pieces at the start) mixed with Star Wars and Traveller.

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That art looks really nice but if you're going to pitch something, you need to learn how to summarize stuff concisely and in a way that is immediately intriguing. It can be really helpful as a writer to try and summarize the most important parts of your story in as few eords as you can, while still making it sound enticing. This can help you figure out what the most interesting elements of your idea are, and how to present them when you're trying to get people to pay attention to your work.

Okay sure user,by thway this is not me,it just some random guy

>,by thway
(By The Way)My mistake

I was thinking that the entity would manifest in his back as a... Let's say siamese twin of sorts, his powers would include: Regeneration, Absorption and Morphing.
I'm not sure about what would be a "good" side-effect Tho, maybe the host starts looking more like a humanoid abomination, looses his sanity/consciousness, after using this entity a lot of times.
I was toying with the idea that at the start of the story, the character dynamic would be like this: the entity would be good in a primitive way (Protects life, defends the weak, etc.) and the host is the asshole, you know a bully who just looks after himself, living irresponsibly without giving a damn (but he's going to show little signs of having a heart of gold), so they have to learn how to tolerate each other for their survival's sake.