Hey guys, so last year I released this webcomic on Deviant Art (weekly page) and Webtoons, and didn't get much feedback so I was looking for some input or moderate critique (just don't tear me to shreds, lol).
It's basically a slice of life mixed with a bit of paranormal genre, I'll post here the first episode which consists of 24 pages, wanna hear opinions on the story, the characters, what would you like to see, etc, thanks in advance to anyone who reads this!
>(just don't tear me to shreds, lol).
Then don't post on Yea Forums.
This was the teaser page back before I released the comic on its first Monday (hence the road sign there).
Page 1.
Does the creature fuck her?
Page 2.
Sorry, no, it's a comic for pretty much all ages, maybe someday in a doujin if this ever gets popular enough, lol.
Hey I don't want to be a dickhead, but I'm pretty sure this kind of stuff should be reserved for . I'm not exactly an authority on this sort of thing, so I wouldn't really know.
Unless of you intend on storytiming, then oh shit you are. ive been writing this post for too long what the fuck am i doing
Page 3.
lol, don't worry, I'm pretty new here, at least at posting, I tend to just watch... from the depths... lol, but thanks for the heads up, I sure don't wanna screw with the rules here, ever.