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The Executioner
Nathaniel Rivera
Camden Rivera
Aiden Butler
Samuel Gray
Jace White
Camden Stewart
Ethan Diaz
Liam Howard
not sure about the art, something about it feels stilted and most of the scenes feel empty, except maybe for the last panel on as to the dialogue, it ain't grabbing me; but the premise seems interesting so i'll keep reading for a bit
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Elijah Ortiz
Thanks for the honest feedback,
Yeah we're operating under a tight budget for this, hopefully if we get backing for a full book we can put more life into the scenes :)
Christopher Cook