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The Executioner
Nathaniel Rivera
Camden Rivera
Aiden Butler
Samuel Gray
Jace White
Camden Stewart
Ethan Diaz
Liam Howard
not sure about the art, something about it feels stilted and most of the scenes feel empty, except maybe for the last panel on as to the dialogue, it ain't grabbing me; but the premise seems interesting so i'll keep reading for a bit
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Elijah Ortiz
Thanks for the honest feedback,
Yeah we're operating under a tight budget for this, hopefully if we get backing for a full book we can put more life into the scenes :)
Christopher Cook
Zachary Allen
Lucas Thompson
uh,oh, i didn't think this was an artist posting their own stuff - man, i'm glad i liked it now because you wouldn't appreciate me when i think something sucks :B
Leo Rivera
Isaiah Wilson
I'm not the artist lol. I'm the uh... producer? I guess? And world-builder/co-writer :)
I was waiting to post this until we had an indiegogo in place but its taking a while and I am getting frustrated, just want to get it out there to see what people think.
I've been trying to find outlets who'd like to review it... only one that got back to me wanted me to write the review for them lol.
David Cruz
Angel Perry
Jonathan Gomez
James Richardson
Andrew Jones
Andrew Gomez
Bentley Rivera
Elijah Howard
Alexander Gray
And that's the last page for now.
Feel free to comment if you wish :)
Brandon Thomas
If you're going to pitch something to Yea Forums, you ought to have a more detailed opening post than that.
Asher Rogers
No disrespect my man but thats Taskmaster.
Adam Perry
Eh it was spur of the moment and I'm terrible at knowing what to write :)
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Yeah there's some similarity alright, wasn't intentional but I guess some design queues just end up looking similar regardless.